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Old 01-12-06, 08:19 PM   #16
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the beat is nice...voice is coo sounding...flow and delivery is smooth & grimy nice ish...lyrics is nice...hook is catchy...second verse was nice lyrics was str8...over-all dope peice man keep it up.

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Old 01-13-06, 06:49 PM   #17
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Props to all yall for the feed
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Old 01-13-06, 07:39 PM   #18
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beat got good feel to it? nice feel good vibe.

hook is pretty ill. Good flow

espcae like David blaine line is tight. good flow and delivery. Quality ill as usual. good shit on this verse, plant the seeds line nice. dope shit for this verse.

second verse same shit. Like damn flow so ill, I could seriously vision hearing you on the radio and shit. Really everything is tight you did. good shit on this.

Overall, really nice track. I ain't like tempo of track as you'd kno, but shit was still dope listen. Really enjoyed it yo. 9.5/10 keep it up. pc
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Old 01-14-06, 05:19 PM   #19
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^^^^lol, ah'ight son...I hear ya....props for the feed
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Old 01-14-06, 05:46 PM   #20
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Copperfield line stood out to me.....that was pretty nice. Not really much else to say since everyone else already beefed your head up......lol.

Just re-read what Calam wrote, cause that's pretty much how I felt.....solid track, just not your best

Also, the rhyme scheme seemed a little weird to me.....
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Old 01-14-06, 06:35 PM   #21
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Copperfield line stood out to me.....that was pretty nice. Not really much else to say since everyone else already beefed your head up......lol.

Just re-read what Calam wrote, cause that's pretty much how I felt.....solid track, just not your best

Also, the rhyme scheme seemed a little weird to me.....



^^^Well I appreciate the feed.......jus wished you were more descriptive as to what your likes an dislikes were cuz Calam's was very short-stated as well...but good looks anyways
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Old 01-14-06, 07:21 PM   #22
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beat's hawt...hook was kinda eghh...I've heard way better from you Michael ...should've changed up ya flow or effects on the hook, that'd have made it more effective to me...track was kinda on the same level the entire time, should've changed it up a bit
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