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View Poll Results: Who won this battle?
Zarbon 0 0%
Efusive 5 100.00%
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Old 01-24-04, 06:04 AM   #16
D.liver.E
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thiz one iz kinda obvious... Efusive's skillz way more advanced so it waz ez for him to merk thiz Zarbon kid. Zarbon your shit was juzt 2 basic for Efusive, u should try and use some more wordplay and shit. u got the right idea just need to work it out a little bit better... Vote- Efusive

plz drop some honest votez on thiz one, thxz:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109348
 
Old 01-24-04, 07:18 AM   #17
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efusive one this one for sure. zarbon's verse was alright, but it was a little too introspective, saying you good you were as oppose to insulting him. very nice punchline for e, and a nice flow. i'm sure unshamefully vastly needs a comma in there to make it make ne sense, but i'm guessing it's just a typo. better multi's and metas and flow from efusive, so it's gotta go to him. can somebody vote on my link below? my battles being ignored.
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Old 01-24-04, 07:22 AM   #18
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argh nuts. i don't have enough votes to vote proper on this. oh well.
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Old 01-28-04, 02:27 PM   #19
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This is my last upping common this battle has been up for 5 days already

please get this overwith
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Old 01-28-04, 08:53 PM   #20
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Efusive..you had good structure, perfect flow and some hard hitting punches..they were complex but make sure u add personals in them, and try to get more metas too

Zar your flow was aight but u didn't have any punches that really hit hard...punches are the key in battling so try to get them next time, there 50% of ya verse.

overall - Efusive took this battle wit eas...his punches were much harder and more complex, keep battling guys
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