Voted For: Tekneek

tekneek

imma show u the reason why the devil made me rap-in-hell….....
New Edition must like to ‘collect weed’ how he be “STACKIN-L’s”….....
"L's" punches are played, but still a goood punch
yeah I can ‘TOSS-BREAD’… n ‘SWING-THE-TOAST’…......
but I’m like ya ‘Paper-boy’, the way I ‘fling-ya-POSTS’.......
good punch, wordplay
Pardon-duke cuz I trap-these-‘ardent’-dudes,.......
for thinking they ‘hot’ when they stay “fallin off bars” like “wack trapeze-artists-do”…
another solid punch, more good wordplay
look boi, i know u definately-ass... ...i juss got locked for the second time, but the only time u 'seen a cell' was lookin through a 'microscope' in ur 'chemistry-class'.....
lol, nice closer

overall- very good verse, no bad bars, most of them hit hard... great wordplay throughout the verse

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New Edition

I thought you are hard spitter, but u make ur shit topical,
i thought u broke my computer, but that was just tecnical,
not much of a diss....
u wanted to take off ur 1st lose cauze thats was shame for you,
man,u cant be serious,thats like remove tattoo but u can always get 2,
sorta stretched.... ok punch
i would eat u alive if i havent taste you,like taste that sweatness of wonderland,
but ur like old shit,like toffee.............................like those old englands
very stretched........................................<<doing that doesnt help, it just makes it more obvious...

[b]overall- not bad, but nothing good either.....
tekneek wins this easily...

v/tekneek


please vote on my battle w/stanza, link in sig

i must have deleted part of that vote....
in my explanation for method's last bar, i said:
very stretched........................................<<and doing that doesnt help, it just makes it more obvious

Voted For: Tekneek

Tekneek

imma show u the reason why the devil made me rap-in-hell….....
New Edition must like to ‘collect weed’ how he be “STACKIN-L’s”….....
^Nice diss, good wordplay 8/10^
yeah I can ‘TOSS-BREAD’… n ‘SWING-THE-TOAST’…......
but I’m like ya ‘Paper-boy’, the way I ‘fling-ya-POSTS’.......
^its iight kinda a jab...good word play again 6/10^
Pardon-duke cuz I trap-these-‘ardent’-dudes,.......
for thinking they ‘hot’ when they stay “fallin off bars” like “wack trapeze-artists-do”…
^lol haha this was funny punch 8/10^
look boi, i know u definately-ass... ...i juss got locked for the second time, but the only time u 'seen a cell' was lookin through a 'microscope' in ur 'chemistry-class'.....
^nice closer, hit hard 9/10^
Overall you had extremely hard hitting punches, flow was good....good word play an over all good drop and verse towards your opponnent.

New Edition

I thought you are hard spitter, but u make ur shit topical,
i thought u broke my computer, but that was just tecnical,
^You really forced the rhyme...not a diss at all 0/10^
u wanted to take off ur 1st lose cauze thats was shame for you,
man,u cant be serious,thats like remove tattoo but u can always get 2,
^This was iight nothin special....4/10^
i would eat u alive if i havent taste you,like taste that sweatness of wonderland,
but ur like old shit,like toffee.............................like those old englands
^felt you really forced the rhyme didnt really think it was a good closer...2/10^
Overal i wasnt feelin your verse, i feel it had not hard hitting punches and you forced rhymes that just werent workin Nothing really played but nothing really hit hard though up on ur punches

v/tekneek

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