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Old 05-06-04, 01:34 PM   #16
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vote wit reasons

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All feedback was the same on our last battle, only negativity was directed at your verse...
Cockiness got him sayin crazy shit, take all ya winnin predictions and see them reversed...
WIKED RHYME

Loss by loss added up when against skill, seems like your losses are in sync as the rockettes....
Sarcasm shows the fear because of a rough road schedule, and u dont perform well wit vets...
NT GOOD AT ALL

Than you rep ya crew, only four members, it aint even large...
No wonder your crew fucking sucks, they have you in charge!...
STR8 UP FUNNY DISS

The way your record’s goin, theres no chance of bein an expertise…
And it doesn’t help that you loss category is more populated than the Japanese…
OOOOHHHHH DIS IS GD

And how you gonna edit your verse post and than act like no one will notice...
Its straight, you can edit after i dropped, still get the loss afta feedin off this...
ALRITE

Stead of visitin tutorials afta ery battle, receivin losses by the bunch...
Grow fists, maybe you'll have a chance at landin a real fuckin punch...
HA HA

For real this bitch knows deep down he loves me, dog im like an idol to you...
I make peoples 'heads' turn when my 'shoulders' brushed off so he copped the shampoo...
JOKES

Shoulda at least tried against enygma cause you had no chance in this one...
14 vs 18, punches, flow, personals, and metas...merked you and i aint even begun...
HEVVY FINISHER

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Old 05-06-04, 02:34 PM   #17
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you didn't read my verse, did you?
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Old 05-06-04, 03:12 PM   #18
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v/ Shadows Edge . .

Alright Verse Shadow, Work On Using Harder Hitting Punches And Less Filler. .

LI . . Nothing Really Appealed To Me In Your Verse Thus You Didn't Get My Vote..
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Old 05-06-04, 03:26 PM   #19
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^^ care to explain that shizzo a bit better....
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Old 05-06-04, 03:39 PM   #20
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votes = 2 - 2....jae cyphs wont count cuz it aint explained....and luminaz vote wont count cuz it aint explained....
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Old 05-06-04, 04:03 PM   #21
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Okay Explaining . .

Quote:
Flip scripts? Best flip the pencil and erase your text
My train of thought alone leave your tracks in wrecks


A Little Played But Still Nice. .

Quote:
I leave you so lazy… that even your heart is dead-beat


Not Bad . .

The Hit You So Hard I Just Fisted Your Mom ,

Would Of Been Cool If It Wasn't A Mom Diss Lol ..


As For LI . .

Nothing Really I Could Quote ..


Quote:
Than you rep ya crew, only four members, it aint even large...
No wonder your crew fucking sucks, they have you in charge!...

Small Crews Are Usually Better One, And Two The Second Line Was Pretty Weak Due To Everyone And Their Brother Using It . .

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Grow fists, maybe you'll have a chance at landin a real fuckin punch...



EXTREMELY Played. .


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I make peoples 'heads' turn when my 'shoulders' brushed off so he copped the shampoo...


Attempt at Word Play Failed

V/ Stands Shadows Edge.
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Old 05-06-04, 04:07 PM   #22
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3-2 if you count luminaz by my count....
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Old 05-06-04, 04:08 PM   #23
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na if u counted luminaz it'd be 3-3.....but we aint countin his......
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Old 05-06-04, 04:11 PM   #24
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^^ luminaz posted twice... so i'm counting his even though the vote was whack. you have kingo solo and luminaz, i have enygma, flow and jay
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Old 05-06-04, 04:18 PM   #25
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ohh my bad i didnt look at luminaz second vote i thought it was sumone else....aight....
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Old 05-06-04, 06:38 PM   #26
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this was a tight battle ere,

flow-shadow
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real close but shadow jus sneaked it for me but real gud drop from both...peace
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Old 05-07-04, 06:17 PM   #27
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5-2..anymore votes?...........
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Old 05-08-04, 06:01 AM   #28
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He made that after I told him "I'ma no show"... I don't even gotta drop
You should be used to being underdog though... you girl like it on top
Must I re-iterate? This whack kid is just fourteen
Audio L’s iterate because his voice sound like a queen
0-1, peeped your battle son, no wonder you dropped out
Hey maybe you can try again…
…when you get pubes to sprout

ok ish, it looks like you are trying TOO hard to change ya structure dog, it sont flow well. stick to wot u are used to yeh
i liked the use of a quote in ya verse, good ish

7/10

Than you rep ya crew, only four members, it aint even large...
No wonder your crew fucking sucks, they have you in charge!...
The way your record’s goin, theres no chance of bein an expertise…
And it doesn’t help that you loss category is more populated than the Japanese…
Shoulda at least tried against enygma cause you had no chance in this one...
14 vs 18, punches, flow, personals, and metas...merked you and i aint even begun...

some tight shit there son, in flowed well and basically merked shadows edge,
you took this one easily in my eyes

8.5/10

v/ L.I

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Old 05-08-04, 04:18 PM   #29
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5-3 thanks for feedback.........ima hit up that match tonight........
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Old 05-08-04, 04:33 PM   #30
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yeh make sure dog cos it gettin slept on
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