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Old 05-03-05, 06:07 PM   #16
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Dis shit was pretty dope cuzzin'z good structures good flows good rhymes and good drops from all......i give it a 8/10......~1~

RTF Please heres da link..........
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Old 05-03-05, 07:38 PM   #17
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aiight i'ma hop on that now...holla uppin fo mo
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Old 05-03-05, 07:38 PM   #18
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thanks.. uppin for some more feed...
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Old 05-03-05, 07:47 PM   #19
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word, i thought mixtapes was more of a poem, and kinda threw of flow.....but not bad, doe bags, a little more anger in his, but mixed up the tone a bit, which was good....i thought LFS had the best imagery/emotion, but your lines were a little long, but you used nice vocab, which is good.......overall, this was decent, each brought a different view/aspect which was refreshing.....3 different writing styles, brought together to make a decent open mic, keep up all
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Old 05-03-05, 07:52 PM   #20
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lol i thought mine was some topical kinda shit lol...oh yeah the girl i wrote it too...said yes...i'm goin to prom boys lol....
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Old 05-03-05, 08:21 PM   #21
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Creativity and flow was nice...good job on this, I enjoyed reading it. Vocab was pretty nice too.
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Old 05-03-05, 08:21 PM   #22
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heh.. hope u have a good one...uppin!
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Old 05-04-05, 01:18 PM   #23
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uppin for the sensitive cats out there lol
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Old 05-06-05, 07:40 PM   #24
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^ lol... yea uppin....
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Old 05-06-05, 10:10 PM   #25
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Word. This shit was pretty cool. All of ya excelled in different areas.

Doe: lmao.. Nice verse.

Mixtape: Not that great vocab, but good emotion.

LFS: Nice vocab and emotion. I was feelin it.

Only thing is the topic wasnt reall original or anything... But you all pulled it off nicely...
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thx OMB that means a lot from you lol..upin this for morr feed
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Old 05-10-05, 12:16 AM   #27
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come on now.. uppin for some more.....
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Old 05-10-05, 12:24 AM   #28
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LoL yeah u right it lacks multis... Got the POINT across but lack multis

hot shit overall tho keep doin what u do fam... holla
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Old 05-10-05, 07:42 AM   #29
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blah....this is a piece of shit...even my dog could do better than this on a rug....weak wordplay


had no meaning, talking about a bitch?...aint she you?....and you calling me weak when you don't even know what a 'muiltis' is, fucking new to rappin, your first time huh...your a fucking virgin to rappin

l f s THA whut??...who???...fam we can't hear you!!!

elevate fam.....PLEASE

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Old 05-10-05, 11:44 AM   #30
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sumones angry!!...damn homie, why u lyin like dat...u know u luv dis OM...dont trip...lmao
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