yo...
Your girls a slut. No lie, I mean it guy
She known for takin' in a foot..
.. and I ain't talkin' bout penis size!
..this was aiight. could'a been more harsh, but not a bad opener..
Your girl's loose. It's charades, when she make you feel big
I call her Hannibal, the way she known for eating the kids
..pretty cool. this wasn't bad..
Your bitch's lips so cold. They makin' my pain ease
She givin' me head so fast, that I be getting a brain freeze
..this was dope. i like it alot..
So... if you fail to please, she won't frown, cuz there's a line
She like dominoes..
.. she'll go down one at a time!
..eh.. aiight, could'a been better, maybe?..
You know I'm lovin' this dime, cuz she a damn good rider man
Makin' me spray out that stringy stuff, like I was spiderman
..lolz. aiight, but just a funny punch really..
But enough of that bitch, with chicks, I'm upright and center
And nah, I ain't a bum<-- that's just where I'm gon enter
..this was pretty dope. that dooky luv, nigga..
No lie, I'm like a tampon. I'm being serious
Women want me up in there atleast once a month, period
..not bad. wordins a lil off to me, but cool..
I'm a master in this pimp shit. Wooing the dames
I pull so many tricks...
... that I put Houdini to shame
..yea! niceness here..
I do this pimp shit on my own. Never taught to act
I throw out better game, then MVP quarterbacks
..cool, but could've used a lil more wordin for a better effect..
Bitches all be hating cuz they know that I'm a mack, son
But I ain't pissed off<-- that's just a result of last nights action
..roflz! r.kelly ass nigga! this was funny man..
Ladies fall to my feet, I got their hearts and I can bet..
The way everyone digging this mac...
.. Microsoft's starting to sweat
..lolz. it's a cool concept, but i dunno. cool anywayz..
Bitches say yes to me 24/7/365, don't play me yo
While that number above ^^ is your maybe/yes/no ratio
..lolz, creative but could'a been better imo..
Bitches know my name by heart. All do, except for this chick
Who kept my name in her mouth all night...
... I guess she mistook me for a Dick
..yea, it's aiight. but not my fav line..
I'ma pimp, while you a homo, son. We all know that's a fact
I ram the pussy till they need first aids<-- while that's what you'll contract
..dope! this was an illy ender, son!..

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When you’re getting over ya girl, i’ll confess if you save me the bitchin’
That i’ve also been getting over her…… into some crazy positions
..the concept was creative, but i didn't really like the punch..
Fuck ya lazy writtens, when it comes to pimpin, ima make her do me
When I go after a chick, ima 'get shorty' like that Schwarzenegger movie
..wrong movie man. but cool idea..
Ya can't move me with those ugly lines ya bust, you're done, stop.
The lines I bust across ya mom are less disgusting then the one's you drop
..lolz. illz fam! kind'a puts a picture in my brain..
I’m telling ya b, girls love to go down and put their melon on me
Until I hit them with that sticky icky like I was sellin ‘em weed
..hmm, i like it but i dunno. ah, nvm. it was cool..
How you gon’ see me? Your girls aren’t burnin’ hot
They’re more like tv’s, even a 3 year old could turn ‘em on
..maybe, but aren't u supposed be talkin bout bein a mack?..
But you deserve ya props, cuz dawg I’m amazed
You’re the biggest pimp ever……… to log onto aim
..oh! this is funny, but yet again.. not really feelin. nawmeanz?..
I get a breasy then bail, you can see me with tail
While Spul’s with those plywood bitches… flat, and easy to nail
..lolz. this was funny. wish u had more punches like this..
They’re easy as hell, when it comes to my girls, watch how the whore handles
When i’m getting my knob slobbed like there was saliva on my door handle
..lolz, this was witty. if ya would'a taken more time wit it, it would'a been totally ILLZ..
My click’s catchin more damsels, every bitch know who we are
Cuz I’m known to give them a hotrod like I sold her a car
..cool. a lil plain, but it was effective..
Ya heard me? In this mack battle, how the fuck you gon' murk me
When I make bitches gobble gobble like a fucking turkey?
..naw! this was lame, yo..
Don't jerk me, i'm on that pimp shit, a dick is what a hoe gettin
Cuz I dominatetrix
And I also happen to know that's your moms pro-fession
..DOPE wordplay. i haven't seen it. niceness here..
No bro's testin, i'm a pimp, player, mack, whatever you wanna call it
Quick to make a bitch swallow Jack like a fucking alcoholic
..naw! too weak. maybe wit better wordin, but too plain here..
I'll screw up a skirt, pound that shit till she's screwed up n' hurt
Only time Spul sweeps a bitch off her feet is when he screws up at work!
..NO! play'd to high hell and u should know this..
You're murked, so when I see a bitch walking, ima hop on-her
And hit her with more white lines
then the single file ones at the start of a heavy metal con-cert
..maybe! the creativity was there, but not too effective..

DAMN! this was a good battle, but overall i felt Spul dominated it quite easily. i know for a fact this wasn't Jack's best drop. he did pretty good, but for some reason didn't try as hard as could. still, Spul had a lot of good lines in his battle. he was consistant and a bit more creative wit punches. Jack, u had the cocepts, but the wordin was off on a lot of them. still, u did ur thing wit a pretty good verse man. dope battle guyz.

v/ Spul

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Man, can I atleast edit the line where I put the wrond movie? Lmao.

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^do it. i'm out tho. thanks for vote untold. but yea, go ahead

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uppin..........

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the fuck, we got the most views by like double the second most views. and got the fewest votes? BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO vote mu fuckas!! stop reading only

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Your girl's loose. It's charades, when she make you feel big
I call her Hannibal, the way she known for eating the kids
So... if you fail to please, she won't frown, cuz there's a line
She like dominoes..
.. she'll go down one at a time!
You know I'm lovin' this dime, cuz she a damn good rider man
Makin' me spray out that stringy stuff, like I was spiderman
Bitches all be hating cuz they know that I'm a mack, son
But I ain't pissed off<-- that's just a result of last nights action
Bitches say yes to me 24/7/365, don't play me yo
While that number above ^^ is your maybe/yes/no ratio
Bitches know my name by heart. All do, except for this chick
Who kept my name in her mouth all night...
... I guess she mistook me for a Dick

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When you’re getting over ya girl, i’ll confess if you save me the bitchin’
That i’ve also been getting over her…… into some crazy positions
Ya can't move me with those ugly lines ya bust, you're done, stop.
The lines I bust across ya mom are less disgusting then the one's you drop
I’m telling ya b, girls love to go down and put their melon on me
Until I hit them with that sticky icky like I was sellin ‘em weed
How you gon’ see me? Your girls aren’t burnin’ hot
They’re more like tv’s, even a 3 year old could turn ‘em on
I get a breasy then bail, you can see me with tail
While Spul’s with those plywood bitches… flat, and easy to nail
My click’s catchin more damsels, every bitch know who we are
Cuz I’m known to give them a hotrod like I sold her a car
Ya heard me? In this mack battle, how the fuck you gon' murk me
When I make bitches gobble gobble like a fucking turkey?
No bro's testin, i'm a pimp, player, mack, whatever you wanna call it
Quick to make a bitch swallow Jack like a fucking alcoholic

I think JTR got this pretty easily. From Spul I really liked the maybe/yes/no ratio, that shit was funny. Hanibal and dominoes lines were also pretty good. Rest of ya verse was decent, but inconsistent at times. JTR didn't have many lines at all which I felt missed. My fav was the plywood line, that was really witty, I laughed at that shit. The bust lines and tv shit was really witty as well. Nice battle here, well worth the read.

Vote - JTR

^word so what's that 1-1 or 2-1? i'm coo with either. uppin' for more votes!

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yo...
Your girls a slut. No lie, I mean it guy
She known for takin' in a foot..
.. and I ain't talkin' bout penis size!
Your girl's loose. It's charades, when she make you feel big
I call her Hannibal, the way she known for eating the kids
Your bitch's lips so cold. They makin' my pain ease
She givin' me head so fast, that I be getting a brain freeze
No lie, I'm like a tampon. I'm being serious
Women want me up in there atleast once a month, period
I'm a master in this pimp shit. Wooing the dames
I pull so many tricks...
... that I put Houdini to shame
Bitches all be hating cuz they know that I'm a mack, son
But I ain't pissed off<-- that's just a result of last nights action
Bitches say yes to me 24/7/365, don't play me yo
While that number above ^^ is your maybe/yes/no ratio
^LMAO
Bitches know my name by heart. All do, except for this chick
Who kept my name in her mouth all night...
... I guess she mistook me for a Dick

vs

Fuck ya lazy writtens, when it comes to pimpin, I got hoes 'ta do me
When I go after a chick, ima 'get shorty' like that Travolta movie
Ya can't move me with those ugly lines ya bust, you're done, stop.
The lines I bust across ya mom are less disgusting then the one's you drop
How you gon’ see me? Your girls aren’t burnin’ hot
They’re more like tv’s, even a 3 year old could turn ‘em on
But you deserve ya props, cuz dawg I’m amazed
You’re the biggest pimp ever……… to log onto aim
I get a breasy then bail, you can see me with tail
While Spul’s with those plywood bitches… flat, and easy to nail
They’re easy as hell, when it comes to my girls, watch how the whore handles
When i’m getting my knob slobbed like there was saliva on my door handle
My click’s catchin more damsels, every bitch know who we are
Cuz I’m known to give them a hotrod like I sold her a car
I'll screw up a skirt, pound that shit till she's screwed up n' hurt
Only time Spul sweeps a bitch off her feet is when he screws up at work!
^LOL



v/ SPuL

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..The Council..
7 Day Theory

Your bitch's lips so cold. They makin' my pain ease
She givin' me head so fast, that I be getting a brain freeze
So... if you fail to please, she won't frown, cuz there's a line
She like dominoes..
.. she'll go down one at a time!
But enough of that bitch, with chicks, I'm upright and center
And nah, I ain't a bum<-- that's just where I'm gon enter
No lie, I'm like a tampon. I'm being serious
Women want me up in there atleast once a month, period
Ladies fall to my feet, I got their hearts and I can bet..
The way everyone digging this mac...
.. Microsoft's starting to sweat
I'ma pimp, while you a homo, son. We all know that's a fact
I ram the pussy till they need first aids<-- while that's what you'll contract

vs






But you deserve ya props, cuz dawg I’m amazed
You’re the biggest pimp ever……… to log onto aim
No bro's testin, i'm a pimp, player, mack, whatever you wanna call it
Quick to make a bitch swallow Jack like a fucking alcoholic
You're murked, so when I see a bitch walking, ima hop on-her
And hit her with more white lines
then the single file ones at the start of a heavy metal con-cert


Got damn this was a long as fuckin battle

but after reading it twice..

ima have 2 go with spul..he came jus a lil harder here

jack could of took this with a couple more quotes..but
its jus like he was comin soft @ times

v/spul

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3-2 Spul. Upping....

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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=234049
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