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Old 01-24-07, 06:09 PM   #1
Faime S. Quotez
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You're pathetic, to be dope you need somebody's help
cuz the only quote you've had in ya last 3 drops... were from somebody else
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Old 01-24-07, 06:27 PM   #2
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Originally Posted by Faime S. Quotez
You're pathetic, to be dope you need somebody's help
cuz the only quote you've had in ya last 3 drops... were from somebody else


Faime S Quotez u da lamest joke. If I aim da toast watch ya brains get smoked.
My game is dope. when it comes to doin dirt, its like ya rapsheet came wit soap.
Dis dude's fraud. How is you raw wit 2 bars? U a bitch inna man body like Ru-paul.
U'll take more shots den drunks in pool halls. Ya raps couldnt be jazzy if u played for utah.
Ock, I been sick. I can tell you broke. U aint aint got no Roc to sling wit.
Dis joke's a tart. Step to me and watch "Quotez get marked" like proper english.
Ion care who's next. You gon see dese jerks lose, B.
Yall da type to stay home watchin da cheetah girls movie.

NEXT !!!!!

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Old 01-26-07, 03:55 AM   #3
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Originally Posted by Real_Talk
Ock, I been sick. I can tell you broke. U aint aint got no Roc to sling wit.
Dis joke's a tart. Step to me and watch "Quotez get marked" like proper english.

wow... I just cannot believe I've seen this...
talkin like 'dis'.. you aint allowed to speak on proper english..
your gettin fucked over by quick shit like rapists with no stamina..
talk alot of guns.. but hittin nails the only time you bang a hammer cuz
your hangin on by a thread.. and Im about to cut the rope
guess your movin that shit well.. cuz you aint in the vicinity of dope
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Old 01-26-07, 03:55 AM   #4
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ain't this off the top?! then why u pre-meditate first
ur like the first to post in the cypher.. 'n then edit ya verse
if u gon make it a habit, then i gota goal king
next time u press the button how bout u take out the hole thing
ya shits bland. stop venturing ta sites, cuz u sure wack
it's like u ali g, but every board u go to u borat
where your from no 1 spit fire. fo me it's a breeze ya jerk
ur home site ain't ready 4 beef, they more like the freezing works
real talk, real dudes don't speak to ya. u's a lame phony
so when u say "holla at ya boy" we contact games homie
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Old 01-26-07, 04:04 AM   #5
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wtf !?
i'm betta than u. so remember when i'm reckin ya g
u did get within a few seconds of me.. but were still 2nd to me
i got problems wit math. them calculations r nifty son
but when i saw ya verse i knew the area of a square was 51
it's critical. i peepd ya sig, it's clear that u lack the sense
but ur nearly close to ur idol.. cuz ur shit looks like an accident
bitch.
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Old 01-26-07, 08:31 PM   #6
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Get out. i'll fill this dude with bullets, you'll die clown
while you sign out, i'll sign the confession for killing you
Te Ora is lame as fuck, stop weeping you bitch
no one steps to you... cause we avoid pieces of shit
die thug, i'll leave you in the dirt, this guy's done
this kid is bugging... so i'll introduce him to my slugs
just stop kid. you're style's garbage and nonsense
this T'll be so worn out the Salvation Army won't want him
Kempo called you the next resin, exciting this child
bitch, that was his way of saying you're biting his style
i'm ahead of competition, Com stay sonning ya text
cause i got an edge... & you got the same one in your neck
i'll burn you beyond recognition in case you don't know
and ID matches'll be like my battle this week... a no show
i bring fire to every angle whenever i tear sluts
i'll make your sideburn... & ya dumbass would get a haircut
why d'you flow here? i'm set to fucking own queers
your verse is total ass that a proctologist wouldn't go near
quit bluffing. i'm calling you out. now you got a grin
Te is checking his cell.. wondering if someone'd actually talk to him
you're a loooser bitch.. and we all know you're lame
when these slugs hit... they'll help decompose your remains
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Old 01-27-07, 05:30 PM   #7
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Originally Posted by Comedian
Get out. i'll fill this dude with bullets, you'll die clown
while you sign out, i'll sign the confession for killing you

just stop kid. you're style's garbage and nonsense
this T'll be so worn out the Salvation Army won't want him


when u were writen that, please tell me u wre baked or high..
that shit was so off, u couldnt get an english faggit to make em rhyme
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Old 01-27-07, 04:55 PM   #8
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you spit bars, only after the mac hit you with a couple from the back of your doom
skills leave it alone, cuz if you came prepared u should of brong ya entier home
stranggle u with shoe laces till hes mouth phomez, then laces hes face with the chrome
laid in hes places but couldnt relate to hes body gun pouder colone
i hang above you niggas, not cuz im dieing or got pushed ova the edge
im god to you fucka's, da hammer dont bust, it smashes hip's till you leaning on a ledge
i'll come clean to you niggas, im a spic that spit from the heart
you a bitch that has a dick but should of been born with a clit form the start
3.2.1. your off... to the deepest part of the ocean for opose'in this boy flowz an
i aint ova doz'en... the flow' posion, im the mover you the rider tryin to stand in a motion
fuck hope'in for quits, BItch.. i'm a 30 foot tall killah thats compact equip
your dumb ass should quit, fuck elevation you couldnt even with a cran lift
I'm ready to stir aicd and splashes it around ya body during your college classes
rip'in your entier masses, is drastic, till you admit you got your ass kick
or your heart start to show like striper's who flashes they cheap asses
the jeep passes, you aint fucking with me.. you need glasses,
da knife slashes every part of ya body till it look like you got heat rashes
trying to have me beat? im to complet you just mier dirty stuck on my feet
Fagget... IF i was stuck in bed I'd Still bust harder flows on my sheet
MOTHER FUCKAH......
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Old 01-27-07, 05:25 PM   #9
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Originally Posted by Ransum
you spit bars, only after the mac hit you with a couple from the back of your doom
skills leave it alone, cuz if you came prepared u should of brong ya entier home
stranggle u with shoe laces till hes mouth phomez, then laces hes face with the chrome
laid in hes places but couldnt relate to hes body gun pouder colone
i hang above you niggas, not cuz im dieing or got pushed ova the edge
im god to you fucka's, da hammer dont bust, it smashes hip's till you leaning on a ledge
i'll come clean to you niggas, im a spic that spit from the heart
you a bitch that has a dick but should of been born with a clit form the start
3.2.1. your off... to the deepest part of the ocean for opose'in this boy flowz an
i aint ova doz'en... the flow' posion, im the mover you the rider tryin to stand in a motion
fuck hope'in for quits, BItch.. i'm a 30 foot tall killah thats compact equip
your dumb ass should quit, fuck elevation you couldnt even with a cran lift
I'm ready to stir aicd and splashes it around ya body during your college classes
rip'in your entier masses, is drastic, till you admit you got your ass kick
or your heart start to show like striper's who flashes they cheap asses
the jeep passes, you aint fucking with me.. you need glasses,
da knife slashes every part of ya body till it look like you got heat rashes
trying to have me beat? im to complet you just mier dirty stuck on my feet
Fagget... IF i was stuck in bed I'd Still bust harder flows on my sheet
MOTHER FUCKAH......


wtf? was this shit for ur english class, or juss to compare to crap..
cuz on this site we drop diss verses, not essays and paragraphs..
dude think he dope, fuck that ill juss throw him in a bag n zip em in it
yea ransum is sick to bad im talking about the one with mel gibson in it
so do urself a favor, go to that eleavation thread n fix rhymes.
cuz ur whole paragraph of like 30 was juss ripped........in six lines
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Old 01-27-07, 06:18 PM   #10
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why's he tryna front? seriously, just go and die geek
what i mean is you even got lost tryna follow my rhyme scheme
i know you're upset, alias kid, i'll leave you coated in red
you can take this beating undercover... like nights alone in ya bed
just take the L, you're wack & require none of my effort
Mike got a V in his name put not a single one in his record
i'll embaress you when i'm taking ya wealth & slaying ya health
you can't save face...
and in this case, cosmetic surgeons won't be able to help
^you're a fucking plastic bitch. we all believing ya fake
plastic, huh? i always knew you were cheap and easy to break
i'll kill you, f'real - and i know it seems that my shit is mean
but try and keep your head down... i'll still bring the guillotine
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Old 01-27-07, 06:56 PM   #11
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Comedian
why's he tryna front? seriously, just go and die geek
what i mean is you even got lost tryna follow my rhyme scheme
i know you're upset, alias kid, i'll leave you coated in red
you can take this beating undercover... like nights alone in ya bed
just take the L, you're wack & require none of my effort
Mike got a V in his name put not a single one in his record
i'll embaress you when i'm taking ya wealth & slaying ya health
you can't save face...
and in this case, cosmetic surgeons won't be able to help
^you're a fucking plastic bitch. we all believing ya fake
plastic, huh? i always knew you were cheap and easy to break
i'll kill you, f'real - and i know it seems that my shit is mean
but try and keep your head down... i'll still bring the guillotine


i was gonna let u live to see another day...but nah.. ur gettin ripped son..

alias nah man, but u can catch me kill u flippin these bars
u juss wrote another 12 lines on me, n i still ripped u in a bar..
jim carey, waynes bros, dane cook..u still need to man up fag..
^^those are comedians, YOU....are just another stand up act..
dude know mike v bitch, i come dope and fly as the wind.
ya name explains it all fag, you come dian to win..
you want me to go on? seriously u just another fag ass kid
who just got ripped off the dome by mike vs half assed shit..
im glad u dropped tho bitch at least u participated in something
been negetive so long hes happy he just elevated to nothing..

n foreal faggit, if u dont know me, ull fall down quick...
cuz my writers block so pimpin....i can call you my BITCH
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Old 01-27-07, 07:42 PM   #12
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'come dian'? listing comedians? you gotta be kiddin...
if you come played,
it's better off if the lines were hot to begin with
i don't do audios, but my texting rocks, dyke
but that won't stop me... from spitting on Mike
you old concepts & wack wording, you don't harm texts
it's that you're the newest fruit on RV... but still aren't fresh
you're childish & trash - no one's bound to read you
cause your writers block is one that's found in preschools
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Old 01-27-07, 08:34 PM   #13
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honestly im done, n i can care less on what u say dude..
cuz if i were to diss that last verse u posted, id be played too..
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Old 01-27-07, 10:04 PM   #14
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Mike V? He was talking about stand up acts or something,
Well he should know...he keep reinacting the day his girl dumped him.
That must have hurt son and I'm one for feeling your pain,
Especially for Mike being so horrible...audio equiptment is in shame.
Sure Comedian posted played and is wack, but this is shit,
You have no right to talk, your fat ass puts the hippo in hypocrit.
But I'll switch to the other fuck, he's garbage to the fullest,
So I'm not talking web page design when I dot com with bullets.
I'm not a gangsta here to pop off and drop this fuck,
I mean he serves as a role model for vacuums...teaching them how to suck.
You're so horrible and I'm sorry, but it's kind of sad though,
That the only time you've got it made in the shade...
...is building a text career in my shadow.
Mike says he gets pussy a plenty, but you must understand,
That those are all lies…he’s too busy eating out the palm of my hand.
I smack dudes and send them back in pain,
And then call your girl Igor...the way she keeps giving me brain.
Shit, but this guy does look like Frankenstien, no joke dude,
I'll hit you with my heel and then drop a crate of medical supplies on you.
I run circles around this fool, but when it comes to running he's fucked,
The only track meet he's seen is a clipboard with all the dick he's sucked.
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Old 01-28-07, 05:55 AM   #15
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Kid ya curtains up, cuz u got yaself a plank 2 walk
ya so full of it.... ur like an ass.... that can talk
lookin at ya verse, it kinda remindes me of SAW
i mean if i was u... id chew my fuckin wrists off
kid ya a nobody/looser homo
how u gona cast a showcase, wen u cant even
..cast a shadow
every rhyme u spit is lame,ull nail urself 2 a cross
so y beat u 2 a win, wen ull beat ur self 2 a loss
see kid it could be worse, i could be crewl
and tear u a new hole 2 shit thru... i probs should
but y? ur mouth seems 2b a pretty good.. substitute
u no even if i tried 2, i dont think i could do
or minumize the amount of shit comin out of u
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