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View Poll Results: Who won this battle?
GKillaz05 5 100.00%
insane16 0 0%
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Old 05-01-04, 11:22 PM   #16
BoRn2SpiTT
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From: TeNNeSSee
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Gkillaz:
The only thing 'insane' is that you havnt gave up yet...
But it will clue into your brain soon cuz you battlin a vet...
-good way to start
Wanna make a bet that he gun take a bite off my verse...
Im treatin this kat worse then Eminem did to fred durst...
-another nice verse
overall:7/10

insane:
i got two words for u and this rap game- forget-it/
this pussy think he a vet but he jus dont-get-it/
insane numba 1 u can call me the fukin leader/
fukin this pussy to prove he's a bleeder/
-not a really good way to start..
overall: 5/10

Gkillz won this cuz of his punches and wordplay.. i also think he stuck wit the flow more consitenly
 
Old 05-02-04, 08:29 AM   #17
Willa
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both battles need elevation
flow g insane u need 2 work on this usin the same word is wack
vocab tie both need work
opener g insane urs was played and didnt really hit
closer tie wasnt feelin either
g u could work on personals vocab and multis u had a goood flow
insane work on ur vocab personals and multis i liked ur structure
vote g i came 2 personal and gs flow was alot beter along with his punches
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