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Old 12-22-03, 02:47 AM   #1
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You want a real reply ok... lmfao
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Mine is the life like no other, no brothers, losin' family and friends
Look as my point of view bends, but yall never see outta my lens
Dope.. opener feelin it
Got cops searchin', strip seachin' and learkin' around for drugs
"Nigga, you best get off of me, before I unlock a round of slugs"
Straight line
Hearts always pumpin', producin' blood to the veins, blood stains
Unleach a steel chain to whip the insanity out of they insane brain
Fucking Ill, dope multis
So used to this, below the windows when the black pistol unloads
Chest with bullet holes that cant get sown, blown kidney stones
Again, holy fuck - sick imagery/multis
Broken door handles, niggas rockin' no brand sandles, no socks
Two glocks in the pocket, unleash a shot, blow off a arm socket
Again.. Dope
Pregnant 12 year old sluts, 200 grown mean tappin' they butts
Pussy wide enough to fit 5 dump trucks, streach marks and cuts
2nd line was Coo, 1st was sketchy
No TV cable, niggas be lucky if they got a food table to eat off on
Kids askin' "whats a dot com?", no computers, not even a phone
Dope imagery.. kinda like my hood
Sellin' drugs at 8, to all adults, they just bait on they dinner plate
No space when you walk out of ya gate...yeah gate, no faith
Again straight
Rollin' up in '76 Cadillacs, got tire tracks across body that lay flat
Metal baseball bats, not hittin' balls, maybe heads that disattach
Dope imagery, multis etc.. again like my hood
This my hood, if you could would you stay and eat mush with me
No TV, but believe me, I have good times, wouldnt yall agree
Sketchy, but ok...
Nah, dont play dumb, where yall probably from, yall never come
Livin' with bums, eatin' off tums with no indigestion...just for lunch
Ok.. Again sketchy
Niggas die everyday in my hall, heads fall, then niggas try to crawl
It against the law, should be when blood splats from wall to wall
Coo Imagery, sketchy flow
Police get scared to even roll past my street, 3 am, still no peace
Fall asleep to rap beats, so much disease, cant hardly breathe
Dope... Imagery is sick
So after you know about my crib, you think you wont get slit?!
Aint about ya fat lip, ya broken rib...see if ya strong enough to live
Was Feeling This...


OverAll: Dope Flow, Dope Multis... Dope Imagery - holy fuck
9/10

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Old 12-22-03, 04:02 PM   #2
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^^^Ahha!!! THANK YOU!!!
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Old 12-22-03, 05:27 PM   #3
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no problem...
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Old 12-22-03, 05:27 PM   #4
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that was tight shit structure was ill
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Old 12-22-03, 05:30 PM   #5
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Hmmm nice shit
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Old 12-22-03, 05:45 PM   #6
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^^^AHHA!!! You guys are unbelieveable. Explain to me why it was "ummm, good" so that I can improve.
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Old 12-22-03, 06:53 PM   #7
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some dope shit Ape.......nice lyrics, you paint a perfect picture of your environment......nearly everything i have read of yours is ill....it was gangster but it was also on the lyrical side too.....anyways, i give it a 9/10...keeep spitting raw, "Peace"..
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Old 12-22-03, 11:17 PM   #8
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Uppin' on this again.
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Old 12-23-03, 11:43 PM   #9
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^^^!!!
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Old 12-24-03, 11:43 AM   #10
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Damn u improved a LOT since I saw ur older battles against people like Bill Clinton. It was ill but here's a lil breakdown:

Flow: 7.5
Internals: 8
Multis: 7.5
Enjoyment: 7

Er check my shit out cos we got similar styles an' I think a collab would be ill:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=101048
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Old 12-24-03, 11:45 AM   #11
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This was some ill shit. Awsome drop. I can tell you spent time on it. I am so sick of people spending like 3 seconds on a fuckn' drop.
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