now listin i hate ppl niggers that think they go hard/
i bet u go about as soft as lard/
now this aint ova no i aint done/
ima kick ur bitch ass so much make u run/
now duh im 13 and pround of it/
doesnt ur nigger ass need to be somewhere gettin lit/
now i aint no rasist u just talk shit/
i bet u even though im 13 i get more clit//

oh my god... wow pimpintay... next time battle someone else who sucks because...wow, i mean no hate or anything but that was bad. eagle had just about everythin up on ya, except maybe structure, yours was just fine there, but man, really work on elevating, especially your opener.

uppin............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ...

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Wins
Realest~Rap(5-0)
3%(5-0)
inkwell(5-0)
eminem minis(5-3)
lyrical extasy(5-0)
whiteRwrong(5-0)

ya i kno im new but idc lol

hey p.t. that was better than our battle, but just like T REX said, u need to elevate more and shit like that. if i culd vote it would be to deser, no offense, but thats how it has to be. sorry man. and deser, will you vote on http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=100587 and http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=100553

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Wins
Realest~Rap(5-0)
3%(5-0)
inkwell(5-0)
eminem minis(5-3)
lyrical extasy(5-0)
whiteRwrong(5-0)

deser_eagle won dis battle, dis was pretty sad. He takes it in everything but structure, dawg, ur lines look messed, gotta mak em straighter. But punches, personals, etc deser_eagle takes dis. Other guy, u needa elevate badly man.

vote-deser_eagle

Return teh favour with honest votes with the battles in my sig plz. thx.

yo, deser won dis battle.

heres da breakdown:

punches:de
metas:de
personals:none
multis:de
structureimpin
suckinessimpin
overall:de

hey, pimpin...look on da bright side...at least you got two of em....LOL

since dis poll is closed...i guess this battle don't count...so have this shit shut down...holla.....

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Wins
Realest~Rap(5-0)
3%(5-0)
inkwell(5-0)
eminem minis(5-3)
lyrical extasy(5-0)
whiteRwrong(5-0)