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Old 12-24-03, 08:27 PM   #16
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..Deep..this piece was simply Deep and Dope..I can't see any 'flaw' in this piece so..although this may seem like a short 'reply'..but..Deep..
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Old 12-24-03, 09:56 PM   #17
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'wow' what's with the apostrophe's ? '''''
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Old 12-24-03, 10:03 PM   #18
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damn... Cam n Sand... great piece.

Cam seldom seems to not impress.
This shit is deep as hell. GangstaRR ish.
Mos Def shit. Rap/poetry. nice drop.
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Old 12-24-03, 10:08 PM   #19
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life's like the Blistering Epitome of what i Came to Expect
The Head with No Neck Ritualistically Conducting Attempts At Oral Sex

Cool line.
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Spoken Word Is outdated, replaced with Bling Bling Anthem's
But my word's Reflect Brighter futures Than Any Necklace Damnit ! ..

Only line that I didn't like; seemed like blasé whistle-blowing, kind of.
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always figured i Wouldnt Become, just another Circus Act
I mean Aside From My Collossal Penis, I'm your Regular Whitebred Nerdy Kat

Wasn't expecting it - I admit it, Ralph chuckled.
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and then, i'll Collapse Within an alcholic Mass of Fits
Ramblin Shit While I Pass A Fist At Pacifist

The consensus best line it seems. . It was good, but I liked the ritualistic oral sex one better.

All in all, it was solid, as usual. Pretty much everything could pass as quotable in this depleted form; regardless, it was a nice read. I thought the change in flow was a good choice - a fresh voice in a mass of monotones. To hell with whoever said you overdid the vocabulary - you can never overdo vocabulary with good word choice. Good piece, crew. . Thanks for letting Bagels get involved, too!

PS - If AOL didn't have so many damned legends, I would lend this link as a submission. Merry Christmas.


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Old 12-24-03, 10:09 PM   #20
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good shit. i hope you rap. it could make an ill song man.
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Old 12-24-03, 10:59 PM   #21
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what you all fucks didn't know .. we did it line for line .. ahahahaha he started .. holla
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Old 12-25-03, 09:49 AM   #22
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^ i know .. lmao.

and to whoever said "aol has too many legends pieces or id give this link" - i actually only have ONE piece in legends now. all my other pieces got taken out.

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Old 12-25-03, 11:35 AM   #23
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i only have one legends piece too .. i had 5 but i killed them all
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Old 12-25-03, 02:22 PM   #24
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Same. I had enough to fill up my own seperate forum, but i asked for them all to be took out.
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Old 12-25-03, 02:29 PM   #25
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i am an rb legend ..
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Old 12-25-03, 02:56 PM   #27
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yah this was also tite, as sed before great imagery, very wise too, ver humble, good meanings and puts some thoughts in my head, malso like sed before, vocab was a little overpowering, a little, flow was nice, definately originality here, keep it up
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Old 12-25-03, 04:13 PM   #28
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ackusation, you mind sucking my cock?
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Old 12-26-03, 08:59 AM   #29
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malso like sed before



Lmfao. I hope that's not catching.
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Old 12-26-03, 12:17 PM   #30
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lol at the amount of replies..rarity....

anyway, it was a dope piece, your knowledge and use of vocab and wordplay was clearly apparent througout. It was never over or underused and it was played and spread out nice n' evenly.

Flow was smooth, could've used some more internals but meh.... was good enough. As for the concept, good imagery...just what i had expected:
!so this Glass Of Gin now symbolises me, ready to be downed
Forget Spoken Word I See Alcoholism as the future .. follow me now .." - nice.

4/5 dope piece, nice to see something of this calibre posted in Open mic, deserves all the good critic you get.
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