..Deep..this piece was simply Deep and Dope..I can't see any 'flaw' in this piece so..although this may seem like a short 'reply'..but..Deep..

'wow' what's with the apostrophe's ? '''''

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damn... Cam n Sand... great piece.

Cam seldom seems to not impress.
This shit is deep as hell. GangstaRR ish.
Mos Def shit. Rap/poetry. nice drop.

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1st Battle In Legends
Bars Of War - Champ
L.L.L. - Former HWeight Champ
S.S. - Hall Of Fame

The Eclipse...

Cool line.

Only line that I didn't like; seemed like blasé whistle-blowing, kind of.

Wasn't expecting it - I admit it, Ralph chuckled.

The consensus best line it seems. . It was good, but I liked the ritualistic oral sex one better.

All in all, it was solid, as usual. Pretty much everything could pass as quotable in this depleted form; regardless, it was a nice read. I thought the change in flow was a good choice - a fresh voice in a mass of monotones. To hell with whoever said you overdid the vocabulary - you can never overdo vocabulary with good word choice. Good piece, crew. . Thanks for letting Bagels get involved, too!

PS - If AOL didn't have so many damned legends, I would lend this link as a submission. Merry Christmas.


Quality

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good shit. i hope you rap. it could make an ill song man.

what you all fucks didn't know .. we did it line for line .. ahahahaha he started .. holla

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^ i know .. lmao.

and to whoever said "aol has too many legends pieces or id give this link" - i actually only have ONE piece in legends now. all my other pieces got taken out.

= (

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i only have one legends piece too .. i had 5 but i killed them all

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Same. I had enough to fill up my own seperate forum, but i asked for them all to be took out.

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i am an rb legend ..

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Sand do you mind dropping feedback on my piece: Clear Skies

yah this was also tite, as sed before great imagery, very wise too, ver humble, good meanings and puts some thoughts in my head, malso like sed before, vocab was a little overpowering, a little, flow was nice, definately originality here, keep it up

ackusation, you mind sucking my cock?

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Lmfao. I hope that's not catching.

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lol at the amount of replies..rarity....

anyway, it was a dope piece, your knowledge and use of vocab and wordplay was clearly apparent througout. It was never over or underused and it was played and spread out nice n' evenly.

Flow was smooth, could've used some more internals but meh.... was good enough. As for the concept, good imagery...just what i had expected:
!so this Glass Of Gin now symbolises me, ready to be downed
Forget Spoken Word I See Alcoholism as the future .. follow me now .." - nice.

4/5 dope piece, nice to see something of this calibre posted in Open mic, deserves all the good critic you get.