I'm a give this to DW...

Along with some advice.

Always keep your format like this, it works.

I've seen you come stretched as hell before, this is better.

Goofy went on a stretched line marathon.

I should smack you for making me read so much!

What ya threw wasn't bad, some of the wordplay was actually pretty inventive...

But a good deal of it was played and contained so, so, so much filler...

It was hard to seperate the good shit from the whack shit.

Better up your format...
Your flow will improve greatly.

Over all, DW wins with the better format, naturally...
He didn't use alot of wordplay, just added it nicely here and there.

Very even, well balanced verse.
Topped off with some nice, not great, but real effective punches.

DW

__________________
Merkings will occur Monday thru Friday, 8 am thru 5 pm, C.S.T.
For my convenience, not yours!

Goofy had a real Abstract flow... I mean it's all good to have that kinda flow... but it hurts you when you're abstract and lacking format... We're voting on this best rhyme and I have a hard time hearing you get that out at a live or Audio battle...

DW gets the vote: would poll it if I could... maybe one day I will

^^^u can............................................... .................................................. .................................................. ......................................1

DW takes this with a better verse...
Nice structure.
Better punches with some sittier flips....

Over DW takes this with a much better battle

Peep me vs. Eki....

Needs 1 vote I think

And I did... For reasons that I already stated above....

Honest Votes on my battle with Mc_Profit please

.................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .1

.................................................. .................................................. ..........................................1 vote needed!

.................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .......1

Ok. I think Dw got this.
Firstly Goofys verse was badly structured which makes it hard to get into. He didnt punch as hard as dw , but he was more creative. Dws Flow was better.

Vote - Dw

oh yeh canboth of you honestly return the fevour

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=101794

.................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ....

Dw take my vote for a better overall verse
he has better flow better punches and better personals
Goofy you did do too bad but. i think you should elevate a lote more before battling more skilled MC's no hate just a vote

Overall: DW

Peace