uupin 4 votes
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Yeh i agree... i THink Joker took this
...........but Payces shit was oright 2

vote in my battle
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=101620

uppin 4 votes
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evan tho your verse realy 5uked kompared ta Jokerz
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they all laughin at the fact...at how your 5o bad at rap
how ur ver5e5 gave me a 5lap...and left my body intact
^^^^^^^^^^^I laghed my a55 of at thyz line
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but Joker had better... one thing tho kuz drop all da * an - an /
that 5hyt takez alot out of da power in yo ver5e... otha than that
keep it krakin kuz, My Vote=Joker

this is an honest vote....payce...cus u pm'd me askin for one
punches- joker
flo- payce
structure- payce
multi- joker
meti4- joker
wordplay- joker
overall- joker.........payce elevate and quit whining....joke won

no beef.....jus a helpin hand...pc*1*

Vote disqualified. Please see this thread on what makes a good vote.
-Cprogress

im requesting a bar for bar breakdown on this battle please. Im styll not sure on how I lost dis battle...............................

LOL @ Carsonn00b Go KillYourself You Still dont know how to punch do you fool.............................................. .................................................. ..............

JOKER
Kid Tried-to -Pass, Your *Mis-Under-Stood* like if ya Spine-Collapsed//
ya Mind-Is-Tapped..When you spit *THE LIFE of the music* just Dies-In-Rap..//
^its an OK opener good wordplay and an OK punch......7/10
To battle me you gotta be MAD!..Im known to *Seal ya Life*-With-GlaD//
Snipe-this-Lad, Your *Facuet is Not Broken* Its Just Your Pipes-are-Bad...// (pipes=Vocal Cords)
^he tied that all together pretty well..a little punch and good wordplay again....snipe has to do with the seal and the seal has to do with glad ......7/10
Ya Insults-are-Baffling..Wordz Has No Electricity so he *Charges his Punches* for Assault-an-Battery//
This is the Results-in-Battling, My *Mind Frame Will Break Ya Mentals* cause my Vaults-are-Shattering..//
^ wordplay again very nice..good punch..creative.....8/10
steel-swords-will-split-ya, takin *photo's of my lifetime* only way he carryin Ill-Mortal-Scriptures//
peel-cores-with-mixtures,only way wordz gettin the *Spot Hot* is when he Stealin-Porno-Pictures
^didn't like this one as much...your setup was off and your punch was weak 5/10...
rock-and-fold-foes, wordz is *Stuck In The Past* still Watchin-Old-Shows//
Pop-with-Low-Blows,and like *Heating In Swimming Pools* My Conditioning is Stoppin-ya-Cold-Flows..//
^really good closer OK punch good good wordplay.....8/10
overall...35/50....

PaYce....
your lyrics couldn't poke me if they came in bunches
Only thing dats a joke...are your played out punches
^ kind of a weak opener....you forced that ryhme there i thought...5/10
u faced Ill Fresh...mentionin Mary J. and Macy Gray
They are as used as the mesh...where the Lakers play
^ok this is interestin...is this a punch???.....i don't see it....filler...5/10
Ill bet cash dat on any given day, I can beat ur ass in
But no votes will come our way... ppl too busy laughin
^meh thats an OK punch the vocab is too simplistic ...6/10
they all laughin at the fact...at how your so bad at rap
how ur verses gave me a slap...and left my body intact
^ok this is talkin about how weak his verse is prolly your best line..7/10
in this battle u rolled 1-2-3...so tyme to pack up ur bags
just another fake MC so quit rap and go back to Batman
^that doesn't ryhme...i call that a missed punch 5/10
overall...28/50.....you came way harder vs...me...

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