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12-30-03, 03:02 AM
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pacaso mac
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summed it up
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MAC4LIFE, M.multis A.authority C.commitment,MFL Pacaso mac the Baskin Robbins Street(hustla tryin to scoop up this ice and cream) |
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12-30-03, 05:27 AM
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roflmmao!!!..that killed your whole verse..lmmao.. j/kin..funny shit..I'm gonna rap this to my cousin..he works at Mc.D's..I'm sure he'd laff..I give this a 8/10..  |
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12-30-03, 03:10 PM
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that shit was mad creative. holla
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12-30-03, 05:37 PM
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thx for the feedback guys. Yea...I don't have the biggest vocabulary in the world...So i just have 2 try n make my shit funny as I can...and add suprises twists n stuff in der. Too bad nobody is feelin the smaller vocabulary nowadays tho...
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12-30-03, 06:57 PM
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yo this shit is funny as hell gettin ass on ya break at Mickey Deez
lmao yo funny shit keep it up.... nice flow n structure easy to read a liked it had me rollin lol
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12-30-03, 07:14 PM
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Damn...
*claps* This was some good shit. It was funny, told a story, great topic, and very creative. I like the "...big buns...likea big mac" line. _________Good Job On This One!_________ |
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01-01-04, 05:11 AM
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That was fuckin hillarious son!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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01-01-04, 07:24 AM
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Banned: Spamming
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Lol at this ..
.. it was funny to read, that's about it. The boxed in structure is gay, shows to me you care more about how it looks than the content in it. I'd ditch writing like that. Also, a lot of the rhyming was madd basic, sometimes like .. only two syllables. = / where is the skill in writing anything like that? I didnt like it.
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01-21-04, 12:24 PM
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uppin
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