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well first off both of yalls verses were pretty weak. But heres my vote:

DOC-had some alright punches, and some waCc punches. Flow was pretty good. But some things bout ur spit was basic. For example ur vocab was basic. U should use some more multis in there. But overall u did pretty good, just need some elevation and ull be able to do better.

168-no offense but that verse was pretty waCc. Some lines didnt even rhyme. the prescription/information line didnt rhyme and the KKK/stiCc line didnt rhyme. i dun kno y u thought they did, Cuz they was way off. Overall ur verse was weak and u need ta learn how to thyme better, no hatin just statin facts.

VOTE:doc

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my vote goes 2 doc_knock!!

reasons:

doc_knock had good punches, structure, flow a good opener helped and a shit closer!

168 had good punches but u need 2 improve on ur structure and flow and ur personals u need 2 look them up!!

uppin once more...yo, need more votes, this needs to close, so close to being done, just help us finish it off, thanks

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