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Soulfire 5 100.00%
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Old 12-30-03, 03:28 PM   #1
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Uppin # 5 THIS IS IT YA'LL. Let's get some votes up in here.
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Old 12-30-03, 04:11 PM   #2
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Old 12-30-03, 04:19 PM   #3
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nam dawg i koudn't evan follow your ver5e.... iz like u wrote a line an den u juz put a word dat rhymed at da end... an pluz 5oulfirez 5truktur took ya out like nuttin... ma vote=5oulfire
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Old 12-30-03, 04:22 PM   #4
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Soulfire:

U had a smooth flow and some alright punches, it fit in smoothly and flowed the same way some of your punches you couldve fixed up to make them more complex but meh it was an alright verse
6/10
Nam:
ya flowfor the most part smooth a little bit choppy in some places the rhyme scheme wasnt matching up u had some okay punches but im some parts that u tryed to diss him you dissed yourself hence the gas line same to him you couldve fixed up your punches to have them better structured and complex.
4/10

Vote: Soulfire
Why: a smoother flow and better punches that were more hard hitting.
 
Old 12-30-03, 04:43 PM   #5
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AIght check it: Both of y'all need to elevate... but that's OK because you're new So here's how I see it.

nam_208: I liked your verse against jgoodz way better yo.... I think you just slepped this shit together... and that last bar... Pure trash kid.... VERY WACK punch In my honest opinion. But keep elevating yo.

soulfire: You need to incorporate some more complex aspects in to your flow.... like multis, use of vocab and timed flow...

All in all Soulfire gets the vote on this one (Funny shit)

Honest Votes On My Joints Please - No Hate - Let's Elevate!
 
Old 12-30-03, 06:06 PM   #6
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Thanks for the votes people. Thanks very much.
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