my vote 730!!

730 had a good structure, punchlines, flow and was easy 2 read!!

doc_knock bored me very much!! had no punchlines, structure, flow and was difficult 2 read!!

vote-730 all the way doc_knock u need 2 improve in ur punchlines and flow and structure!!

^^^One of the main reasons i hate the voting on this site......^^^this dumbass went on flow and structure, when punches is what wins a battle lmao.....now that shit is hilarious...

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you know, people can vote for what they want.

and reign, thats a fucking hate vote, and bullshit too, you're 14, you dont know what the fuck you're talking about.

that aint no fuckin hate vote!!!

730 kicked ass!!

if the mods thought it was a hate vote they would of dqed it so fuck off!!!

^^why do y'all gotta free post.........and why's it takin so long to get some votes?? i mean this an active site y'all should have no problem votin and shit...

This battle's done with, cuz when i'm thru w/ him he'll need pention
as i Knock docs ass, into a whole different time dimension
5/10
here's a question?, are u playin or are u truly this lame?
cuz dude stays underscores anywhere, N i ain't talkin bout his name
6/10
this's a game for me, cuz the first few bars'll be as funny
as i show this Doc what's up.......like a fuckin Bugs bunny
8/10
Listen Hunny, you'll get stuffed like pennies under a couch
while ya angry flow gets trash canned, like oscar the grouch
6/10
i'll bust ya in tha mouth, let my juices flow right through
ya eyes, nose, mouth, stomach, chest and even ass too
7/10
i'll blast you, till ya layin stomach up on the floor
but...
you've been fucked so much it's like you've already been there before
5/10
You're losin this whore, N this win i'm takin it slick
while i'll beat this kid sloppy, like he does to his dick
6/10
stompin this chick, slut you'll get the worse of these shots
cuz Doc just slams against a wall, when he thinks he's hard knocks
7/10
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id be scared of the seven, if there was reason to be
half your shit didnt make sense, might as well have said "tweedledee"
3/10
and if ima need a pension, let me fuckin explain why
ima retire on all my sales, while you stand idly by
5/10
your rhyme aint ill, you're just a fuckin joke
and shit i should know, its my profession to diagnose
8/10
i may be bugs bunny, but you're porky pig, bitch
cuz you stumble through your rhyme, whole body in a twitch
4/10
pennies under a couch? thats fine, good to me
cuz i guess you didnt realize we were talkin your salary
7/10
my flow is like a river, and your style is "choke"
i could come up with more shit if 1000 blunts i had smoked
5/10
you the spit the same shit as everyone else on RB
bring somethin new, and i might give an s-h-i-t
5/10
just one more thing to say before i off this cat
fuck you muthafucka, and god damnit thats that
4/10
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Close battle guys no hate votes return the favor when you have enough posts to vote
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=102920
Vote 730

can i just get a quick win so i can be on my way??.........damn y'all sleep like muhfuckaz up in here.....drop a vote N i'll return the fav.........

aight. pretty good battle, but lemme break it down:

punches - 730: doc, you came with ok punches, but 730 took this category.
flow - doc: 730, yours was good but it kinda bored me a lil and it came off a lil bit.
structure - doc: this really isnt much of a category in my opinion so i gave it to doc because his was easier to read for me.
multis - tie: didnt see any i dont think, so i gave it a tie
overall - doc: this was a close battle as you can tell, but ima gonna go with doc on this one. nice drop by both of ya'll. p'z

vote - doc

ill give it to Doc very close battle guys heres the breakdown though!

Flow=both
Structure=both
Punches=both
Personals=doc
Complex=doc
Overall = doc

730 took it on wordplay and punches. Flow was even as was creativity. Neither got that personal. I think doc's verse would have been better if he didn't feed of 730 so much.

Vote is for 730

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=103069

verse by 730



This battle's done with, cuz when i'm thru w/ him he'll need pention
as i Knock docs ass, into a whole different time dimension
here's a question?, are u playin or are u truly this lame?
cuz dude stays underscores anywhere, N i ain't talkin bout his name
this's a game for me, cuz the first few bars'll be as funny
as i show this Doc what's up.......like a fuckin Bugs bunny
Listen Hunny, you'll get stuffed like pennies under a couch
while ya angry flow gets trash canned, like oscar the grouch
i'll bust ya in tha mouth, let my juices flow right through
ya eyes, nose, mouth, stomach, chest and even ass too
i'll blast you, till ya layin stomach up on the floor
but...
you've been fucked so much it's like you've already been there before
You're losin this whore, N this win i'm takin it slick
while i'll beat this kid sloppy, like he does to his dick
stompin this chick, slut you'll get the worse of these shots
cuz Doc just slams against a wall, when he thinks he's hard knocks

ok verse nuthing came on stronge no hard pounchs a bit of word play a bit of metas no structr or flow

verse by doc

id be scared of the seven, if there was reason to be
half your shit didnt make sense, might as well have said "tweedledee"
and if ima need a pension, let me fuckin explain why
ima retire on all my sales, while you stand idly by
your rhyme aint ill, you're just a fuckin joke
and shit i should know, its my profession to diagnose
i may be bugs bunny, but you're porky pig, bitch
cuz you stumble through your rhyme, whole body in a twitch
pennies under a couch? thats fine, good to me
cuz i guess you didnt realize we were talkin your salary
my flow is like a river, and your style is "choke"
i could come up with more shit if 1000 blunts i had smoked
you the spit the same shit as everyone else on RB
bring somethin new, and i might give an s-h-i-t
just one more thing to say before i off this cat
fuck you muthafucka, and god damnit thats that

better overall verse better pounchs came on very stronge alote of metas multies and better wordplay better structre and flow

overall vote goes to doc

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im goin wiv doc on this 1.....it was close but his flow n punches were jus beta....everything else was even.........gud battle...props to both....pz!

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will ya vote on my battle wiv tolerant level in front lines....4-0 up needin 1 vote....honest vote plz....thanx!