RapVerse.com Community
 Phenom | Kingz | Dabatos | TonySelf | Tha Q | Half Breed | Tito | 7th End RV Radio  

Go Back   RapVerse.com Community > The Cage > Battle Archives > Elevated Front Lines Battles
User Name
Password
FAQ Calendar Search Today's Posts Mark Forums Read

View Poll Results: Who won this battle?
Metaphysik 5 100.00%
TheUnderRated 0 0%
Voters: 5. You may not vote on this poll

 
 
Thread Tools Search this Thread Display Modes
Old 01-03-04, 03:42 AM   #16
ILLunatic
Eye Designs
 
Posts: 1,229
Joined: Jan 2003
Status: Offline
IP: CACD A520

Quote:
Quoted From TheUnderRated
Mix dickriders and ring votes, now thats metaphysiks trail
Took that class in gradeschool, I was too intelligent so i failed
C, The physix of your xpilzit phlows are unnatural to the scientific method...
Cause no matter what you produce in ya rhymes, they'll never be respected
Your like Bullshit Gen eds so i'm a get credit and then drop you...
like oil mixed with water theres no way that i can't top you......
scientifically drop you, burn you up like asteriods hittin the o Zone
A-typically this unknown stops you dead like I was born prone
this battles like david and goliath except this time the giant wins
which is you so congratulations merk me sometime again.........


Punches were decent
Some were played
Alot the concepts were played
ya verse was ok
Still needs some Elevation...
Overall...13/20



Quote:
[i]Quoted From Metaphysiks[/u]
Washed up like detergent, never hit anything like pimps that are virgins//
In need of surgeons, Unders wrapped in towel and burned on top like turbans//

Leave Under out dated like kids wit no dates at dances mad as fuck//
This kid sucks, make you pray to "negative charms" like you believe in bad luck//

Your not ready like premature birth, punchin your face, it hurts//
Hells on earth, put pennies on this beef then squash it for what its worth//

Ill is what your not, your popped, im dialing bullets like I call shots//
Make your throat clot, like suspenseful books thats thickened wit no plot//

Your minds not right like your head tilts to the left, hit your cleft//
Stealing your life like baseball bases, theft, three shots and nothings left//


Punches were also decent
Hit a bit harder than TheUnderRated's
Flow was pretty good.. structure..OLD
Wordplay... some were played...
Overall.......15/20


Vote-Metaphysiks
Meta came a bit harder...
Kinda weak battle tho
TheUnderRated..ya need to elevate a bit
No hate... just bein real
__________________

:: Eye Designs::
Taking Request for the following...

Signatures, Avatars, Album covers, & Website Banners
Send a message via AIM to ILLunatic  
Old 01-03-04, 03:44 AM   #17
SmokaJoka.
InSaNe KiLlAh
 
SmokaJoka.'s Avatar
 
Posts: 1,402
Joined: Jul 2003
From: E-Dub
Status: Offline
Text Record: 44-3
Audio Record: 0-0
Graphics Record: 0-0
IP: 71CE 2E84

i'm not voting....just asking when u gone check in my battle agaist u Meta....i'm sure one of them are over now??

peace
__________________
Send a message via AIM to SmokaJoka. Send a message via MSN to SmokaJoka. Send a message via Yahoo to SmokaJoka.  
Old 01-03-04, 04:00 AM   #18
.Iknoevel.
Banned: Compromised Account
 
.Iknoevel.'s Avatar
 
Posts: 2
Joined: Nov 2003
From: New Jersey
Status: Offline
Text Record: 0-0
IP: 68A1 D302

UnderRated

Mix dickriders and ring votes, now thats metaphysiks trail
Took that class in gradeschool, I was too intelligent so i failed
C, The physix of your xpilzit phlows are unnatural to the scientific method...
Cause no matter what you produce in ya rhymes, they'll never be respected
Your like Bullshit Gen eds so i'm a get credit and then drop you...
like oil mixed with water theres no way that i can't top you......
scientifically drop you, burn you up like asteriods hittin the o Zone
A-typically this unknown stops you dead like I was born prone
this battles like david and goliath except this time the giant wins
which is you so congratulations merk me sometime again.........



Punches were alright, A few played ones
Alot the concepts were played also
ya verse was just ok
Elevation....<-- speaks for itself
Overall...12/20



Metaphysiks

Washed up like detergent, never hit anything like pimps that are virgins//
In need of surgeons, Unders wrapped in towel and burned on top like turbans//

Leave Under out dated like kids wit no dates at dances mad as fuck//
This kid sucks, make you pray to "negative charms" like you believe in bad luck//

Your not ready like premature birth, punchin your face, it hurts//
Hells on earth, put pennies on this beef then squash it for what its worth//

Ill is what your not, your popped, im dialing bullets like I call shots//
Make your throat clot, like suspenseful books thats thickened wit no plot//

Your minds not right like your head tilts to the left, hit your cleft//
Stealing your life like baseball bases, theft, three shots and nothings left//




Punches were good
Not much, but alittle harder then Under's
Flow was pretty good...
Structure - change it up...dont space bars or use //, thats old
Wordplay... that was ok
Overall.......16/20


Vote-Metaphysiks
Meta came a bit harder...
__________________
A.I.

...Gone...
 
Old 01-03-04, 05:14 PM   #19
B.I.Detained
Mona Lisa.
 
B.I.Detained's Avatar
 
Posts: 1,334
Joined: Dec 2003
Status: Offline
IP: 9E53 07A2

wasnt amazing..but i found some good wordplay here
Vote=Meta
why??
BREAKDOWN-
punches-meta
metas-meta
personals-under..thats all meta lacked
wordplay-meta
flow-both
structure-under..i jus prefer yours
overall-META
came w/ nice wprdplay n metas...
concentrate on more personal shit pz

MAKE SURE YA'LL HIT THIS UP PLZ...BEING MAD SLEPT ON
I WILL POST AGAIN IF ITS NOT LOL
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=102931
__________________
"Woop Woop, its the sound of da police"
Send a message via AIM to B.I.Detained  
Old 01-03-04, 09:11 PM   #20
TheUnderRated
Guest
 
Posts: n/a
Joined:
Status:
Text Record: 0-1
Audio Record: 0-0
Graphics Record: 0-0
IP: C156 6FF0

thanx for all the feedback y'all this was my first elevated battle....................uppin 2 close.................
 
Old 01-05-04, 05:05 PM   #21
Reflektionz
BANNED
 
Reflektionz's Avatar
 
Posts: 221
Joined: Jan 2004
From: .::Bay Area 415::.
Status: Offline
Text Record: 5-4
Audio Record: 0-0
Graphics Record: 0-0
IP: 9C65 C5D7

I think metaphysik won this battle i liked his style an struture.

punches an personals were nice..so heres the Break


Punches-Tie
Wordplay-metaphysik
Vocab-TheUnderRated
Enjoyable-metaphysik
Multies-Neither
Structure-Tie

Vote-Metaphysik
He edged it out..
I thought TheUnderRated had it
But Metaphysik surprised me with that comeback
Props to both of you
But Metaphysik gets my vote....

Last edited by Reflektionz : 01-05-04 at 05:10 PM.
Send a message via AIM to Reflektionz Send a message via Yahoo to Reflektionz  
Old 01-05-04, 05:21 PM   #22
The Jett
Im Short.Ur Fat.He's Gay.
 
The Jett's Avatar
 
Posts: 4,987
Joined: Dec 2003
From: Ya Eah
Status: Offline
Text Record: 48-16
Audio Record: 17-11
Graphics Record: 0-0
IP: 1973 EC9D

Ill is what your not, your popped, im dialing bullets like I call shots//

^^Illest line in the battle.....

Other than that- this was a pretty tight knit battle
punches- Tie
Vocabulary- Under(some how i feel he overdid it tho..)
wordplay- Meta(he had some ill wordplay...like that line above)
flo- Tie(different structures....but the both flowed well
multi's- Tie(ok from both....sparingly)
meti4's- Meta(they were just more clever)

Overall Meta....I just think under came to like Webster'ish here.....I've never seen him do this before....he must be tryin summin different......

nice drop both...
Send a message via AIM to The Jett Send a message via MSN to The Jett  
 


Thread Tools Search this Thread
Search this Thread:

Advanced Search
Display Modes

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

vB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is Off
HTML code is Off
Forum Jump



All times are GMT -4. The time now is 02:01 PM.

Powered by vBulletin.
Copyright © 2000-2004 Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.