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01-05-04, 10:24 AM
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Very dope read...
A bit too much self-pity kicking in here. Why so depressed? Just smoke a bowl. Get laid. Beat the shit outta someone. Anyway... Great flow, great wordplay, and real nice emotion. Nice upwards twist at the end... I was expecting you to break down crying, glad you didn't. 8/10
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01-05-04, 10:39 AM
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..Very nice piece...creativity was excellent..along with..your vocab,content..etc...what more can I say???...nice work..
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01-05-04, 11:41 AM
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OriginIll
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Thanks... lol...
B2K.. how bout i beat you up.. that will make me feel better |
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01-05-04, 12:09 PM
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i also replied to this on RnR
dope stuff though reply on mine if u can |
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01-05-04, 02:11 PM
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OriginIll
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Aight
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01-05-04, 04:54 PM
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Good immagery ..nice vocab, .no rules u followed :wink: ..
Nice read..
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01-05-04, 06:52 PM
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Damn Evo ... This was a sicc drop here man ... LoL @ Rich ... That's a name I ain't heard in a while ... This piece was rich with meanin' tho ... No pun intended ... -n- I ... No pun intended ... Was really diggin' a lot of quotables in the verse man ...
cause even when i talk to myself.. still, nobody listens my mind state has become the only kind place to go so i find myself hiding behind thoughts.. just to lay low vodka..as it gets mixed w/ the weeps from my eye to drown my sorrow's along w/ tommorow's good byes cause my future is only a wake waiting on my present to die so the fact of the matter is... you are what society precieves as it precedes to spoon feed you until you believe once you do, your doomed cause they've planted thier seed this means you are no longer you.. & have grown to be who they want you to be Those were the "few" that stucc out to me ... Highly dope ... Great meanin' ... Scheme of this was sicc ... Added more interest to it ... But without it still woud have been dope ... Cuz the content was sicc as shit man ... Anyway ... Keep doin' wat U do while doin' U ... Meanin' keep writin' the illness ... Peace |
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01-06-04, 12:06 AM
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HOT SHIT...
Evolve is one of the best Good work..nice piece Dope imagery.... Very enjoyable.... PROPS
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01-06-04, 09:41 AM
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Ok... Since ya need tha pick me up... Lifts chin, turns slightly to left
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01-08-04, 08:28 AM
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OriginIll
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LOL^^
Mentill thanks for the break down.. appreciated |
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01-08-04, 09:29 AM
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Reply to mine = (
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01-08-04, 12:41 PM
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OriginIll
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Why?... ok fine.. hey that rhymed
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