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oCANTi 0 0%
~Yo What Up~ 5 100.00%
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Old 12-30-03, 05:16 PM   #16
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i cant poll vote, but ill still drop my 2 cents.........thanx for the vote homie..........

UPPIN!!!!!!!!!
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Old 12-30-03, 05:47 PM   #17
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dEAR: certa and yo~what~up


LET ME FIND OUT iM A GUY AND I'M GOING TO SUE

EVERYONE WHO WAS AT THE SCENE OF THE BIRTH

FOR LETTING SOME FALSE INFORMATION GO DOWN ON MY

bIRTH CERTIFICATE U FUCKERZ*



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Old 12-30-03, 06:47 PM   #18
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oCANti is a female first off and second off I am just calling it from my eyes Certified is just mad that I told the truth about his battle with tubesteak so hey don't hate the truth
 
Old 12-30-03, 06:56 PM   #19
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Old 12-30-03, 07:02 PM   #20
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This Battle Was TRash Both Verses Were Messed Up With Structure But I Went With The One With The Better Flow And Ima Say Yo Wat Up Took This

Both Need To Elevate

If Ya Got 100+Posts VOte For This Battle

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=102244
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Old 12-30-03, 07:07 PM   #21
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r u serious u fuckin amateurs
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votes please............................................ ...
u dick ridin bitchmade excuses for male rappers
yall are slow and you'll never make it past the computer.
 
Old 12-30-03, 07:36 PM   #22
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Old 12-30-03, 07:50 PM   #23
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Ocanti... calm yo ass down. You make yourself look stupid with all those unneccesary comments.
You got demolished. You need to wrok on your structure and your flow. Itis obvious that you can rap but you need to learn to transmit that to your computer. The way you write it is the way we will interpret it.
Yo what up you was clean in the majority of categories, just come a lil harder with the punches and throw some more personals in there.
Vote here.... Keep it gangsta!
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=102471
 
Old 12-30-03, 08:03 PM   #24
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See I can except that but not when people criticize without proper representation. Someone break down my verse and tell me where apparently I keep going wrong...........................
 
Old 12-31-03, 12:36 AM   #25
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Yo, ya'll both got some serious talent from where I'm sittin.

Ocanti: Your libra focus was too much and too weak. You gotta use your wordplay better and you aint really seem to get down to the punches for real. Nice flow and structure though. And the personals sucked. But we all gotta elevate, you included. Oh and by the way, anyone who reads the bottom of your messages can tell you are a girl.

Yo What Up: Yo, you got the ill punches, but your structure sucks like hell. Now to me that don't matter that much, but it can be important come votin' time. Also your joint got the point across, but you need more flow. Sometimes your shit just wasn't rhymin. Wordplay was pretty tight. Personals was pretty tight.

For both of you: I don't see much dickridin' goin on here. Just accept what people got to say and use it to your advantage. The whole RB aint against you cause you a girl or whatever, Ocanti.

Close, but I gotta go with Yo What Up
 
Old 12-31-03, 01:56 AM   #26
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Old 12-31-03, 09:20 AM   #27
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^^^shut the fuck up and quit freepostin..................

3-0 me...............

UPPIN THIS BITCH!!!!!!............
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Old 12-31-03, 10:28 AM   #28
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UPPIN #4..............................

CMON NOW.........................

LETS GET SOME VOTES FOOS!!!!!!!
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Old 12-31-03, 11:24 AM   #29
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UPPIN #5!!!!

CMON........IVE VOTED ON A SHIT LOAD OF BATTLES.........

LETS GET SOME FUCKIN VOTES IN HERE!!!!!!
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Old 12-31-03, 01:14 PM   #30
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breakdown

punches yo: im undefeated, but yet, so-r-u, the only way u get "a head (ahead)" is when ur mom votes, but then she bends over and starts to blow-u/
metas yo: ima laugh when ur face hits-the-concrete, my punches cant be stopped, y try?, just quit-ur-beat, i never tie or lose, i cut ur "toes", but never split-the-feet (defeat)/
multies yo: i was callin out another cat but u wanted to take-his-place, its like my punches take the "pencil" u writin rhymes wit and erase-yo-face/
ur a disgrace-to-any-race, this guys been preparin for this by standin in front of baseball pitchin machines, hes gettin "embraced"-for-disgrace/
personals yo: the only way u gonna win is if u can somehow deceive-the-poll,
flow ocani: hers wasnt stretched but was a lil plain
consistancy both: both continued to diss eachother

overall you what up

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