Yo this some ill shit -tech- , It actually has a message not just talkin bout doin drugs or killin mothafucka's. You got somethin to say and thats what rap should be doin. and I just wanted too point out the crazy multie's in this one section... check it out and peace. good drop -tech-.

Spoke in heaven's ways it's a sign
Broke in seven days at a time
Smokin' Lemon haze for dis rhyme ----------------->> Ill

thanx ............................uppn.................. .........

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nice little long but i like reading it

man ya pieces are getting betta man.....but ya structure seems to fall near the end And ya Should Try and Fix that...ya flow was still nice man keeped in the First Couple of Verse then It changed At the end Buit stil i enjoy ya Work.....all and all nice piece man keep It Droping Dawg..PeacE......

long but yet a good read.

A dope piece actually.
Structure was fine, flow was dope
Vocab was nice also..
This was a nice piece allaround
9/10

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My people skills are way better then yours, nigga..

this peice was nice as hell.......liked the rhymes scheme metas and flow..........

good werk,
9/10

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ya i liked dis piece it was dangerous in that it
took a less reckless and thugish approach and actualy
taught a lesson wich can be bad 4 reputation but you
made it sound more 2 ur favor
it definatly made my rethink my life and datz the true
sign of a poet an artist
keep uppin

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uppppppn

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