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01-03-04, 07:20 PM
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IP:
Yo this some ill shit -tech- , It actually has a message not just talkin bout doin drugs or killin mothafucka's. You got somethin to say and thats what rap should be doin. and I just wanted too point out the crazy multie's in this one section... check it out and peace. good drop -tech-.
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01-03-04, 11:18 PM
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Here's Lookin At You Kid
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thanx ............................uppn.................. .........
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01-03-04, 11:32 PM
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IP:
nice little long but i like reading it
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01-04-04, 01:10 AM
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man ya pieces are getting betta man.....but ya structure seems to fall near the end And ya Should Try and Fix that...ya flow was still nice man keeped in the First Couple of Verse then It changed At the end Buit stil i enjoy ya Work.....all and all nice piece man keep It Droping Dawg..PeacE......
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01-04-04, 01:19 AM
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long but yet a good read.
A dope piece actually. Structure was fine, flow was dope Vocab was nice also.. This was a nice piece allaround 9/10
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01-08-04, 05:13 PM
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this peice was nice as hell.......liked the rhymes scheme metas and flow..........
good werk, 9/10 |
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01-12-04, 05:09 PM
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01-12-04, 05:23 PM
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ya i liked dis piece it was dangerous in that it
took a less reckless and thugish approach and actualy taught a lesson wich can be bad 4 reputation but you made it sound more 2 ur favor it definatly made my rethink my life and datz the true sign of a poet an artist keep uppin
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01-12-04, 06:43 PM
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IP:
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-------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Originally posted by -Technician- holla back uppn this joint! --------------------------------------------------------------------------------
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01-13-04, 05:41 PM
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Here's Lookin At You Kid
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uppppppn
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01-15-04, 06:41 PM
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Here's Lookin At You Kid
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upppppppppppnnnnnnn again dont sleeeeeeeeeeepppppp
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