aight thanks for clearin that up

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Sustainment means= if you kept punches comin throughout the battle... consistancy....so you = Dumbass

make sure ya'll hit this link..being mad slept on pz..
i took time on this
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=102236

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aight. well i didnt know what it meant. and ive never been counted against it in any other battle. but thats u i guess

i got by what mostly he said i altered it a lil to my likings... but you gee the point... good battle from newbies (or cats from other sites).... nice show up by both textcess... but don't freepost as much... peeps will come vote... they need votes too ... good ish...

Caesar On3

i gota say GaZeeBo u killed Lil Phresh, but Lil phresh keep goin bcus i like readin ur battles u have good potential!

aight. if u dont have over 100 posts. dont post here. if u want to gain posts, go to emcee interaction or something. this is a battle, not a spam board. andways. uppin #2

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come on peeps. just a few more votes. this actually was a good battle after-all. just a few more. p'z

I think Phresh takes this by just a tiny little bit.

His format sucked with the stretchy line shit.

But he had some real nice wordplay in there, good tight punches.

Same goes for Gaz...

He used some witty wordplay, nice personals, tight format...

But I think the punches weren't as witty or hard as Phresh's.

Close, but no cigar.

For simply better punches and a bit more wordplay...

Phresh.

Holla back...

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Gazeebo just came harder at it my vote goes to him.

Ok breakdown..

GaZeeBo

You had good flow and ok structure...

you had some ok punches like..."This is the french revolution, ur marie antionette i'm the guillotine/
Choppin heads off lacerations more grizzly than that memphis team"

First line was unique as well as second...However it wasn't a hard punch....work on Hard punches that's what wins battles...good effort though...

Lil Phresh

"yah over, its obvious yah already "Used Up Yah Chants"(chance) like |Washed Up Cheerleaders|!! //"

That line there definitly caught my eyes as a reader...You had some other good word schemes as well....I would give the edge to you..however your structure..kinda messed up your flow scheme...which made some of your punches weak....


Good battle by both there is potential in both..better then some battle IV'e seen...

Vote goes to GaZeeBo..