Diverse:

I'll leave this kid feelin sluggish like a severe case of jet lag
have you thinkin he's homeless cuz he ain't got any room to brag
Nice.
Same crew, similar record but opposite directions of elevation
As he drops way below C level while i rise up to the occasion
ok
Carsonjet considers himself to be a so-called supreme emcee
But my words shoot down his hopes like anti-aircraft artillery
ok...bceause of the sig
Twice in a row you got KO'd, by members of our same crew
Now i'm up, the third to go, so i guess it's another L for you
ok
Emerge laughed in ya face when you challenged him to slips
This crew should have you replaced like old people with fake hips
no...
Found the situation whimsical cuz he knew you weren't kidding
You would be to easy to murk so he sent me to do his bidding
ok



Overall a good verse... some personals and some some good punches. Nothing that really made me say "oh shit!" though.

Carson:
11-4? wit what? newbies?...only 4 vets have battled u
it's true...add another merk in crew just like eyeque
I tink I'm missing something....
Noabuse? he's 2-12 I hope u coulda merk'd that kid...
face the facts.wit out ya gramps emerge..u have no wins
ok personal
Forget clappin..I could end this thread wit blanks-n-flares..
I even star' his avi^^look...Im right on top this panda bear
ha, good
It's simply clear..I was better than u even before i was x2
Thought u knew.u couldn't carey a win on me i ya name was drew
ok, some good wordplay
I could set the standard grass..Diverse still can't wip my ass
Leave diverse half-massed...please...drop another personal about my past
had potential but sort of messed up the phrasing. And it's half mast

Another good verse, had a few personals and wordplay.

I had to do this but I think I'd call this one a tie. Well, if I could actually poll vote I'd pick one or the other but it's very tough to make a decision.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=103093

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breakdown

punches c: 11-4? wit what? newbies?...only 4 vets have battled u
it's true...add another merk in crew just like eyeque

metas d: Carsonjet considers himself to be a so-called supreme emcee
But my words shoot down his hopes like anti-aircraft artillery

personals c: Forget clappin..I could end this thread wit blanks-n-flares..
I even star' his avi^^look...Im right on top this panda bear

multies c: I could set the standard grass..Diverse still can't wip my ass
Leave diverse half-massed...please...drop another personal about my past

overall i gotta go with carson good battle both

can you both peep mine thanks
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=102266

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Huh china.

yo diverse took this...
i was feelin his verse more. with da punchez and personals and da wordplay.
carson had a good verse too. but in da end, diverse took it wit da personals...

vote-diverse.

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rite thought id explain more y CarsonJetX2 murked the other biatch. he was beta all round his flow was strong and punches were stronger!the other biatch had no flow at all he may aswell of not turned up!!!!!

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overall can took this easily, his punchlines were better, his wordplay was better, and he had a much better structure verse...

vote - Carson

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I'll leave this kid feelin sluggish like a severe case of jet lag
have you thinkin he's homeless cuz he ain't got any room to brag
8/10 HA
Same crew, similar record but opposite directions of elevation
As he drops way below C level while i rise up to the occasion
7/10
Carsonjet considers himself to be a so-called supreme emcee
But my words shoot down his hopes like anti-aircraft artillery
8/10
Twice in a row you got KO'd, by members of our same crew
Now i'm up, the third to go, so i guess it's another L for you
6/10
Emerge laughed in ya face when you challenged him to slips
This crew should have you replaced like old people with fake hips
7/10
Found the situation whimsical cuz he knew you weren't kidding
You would be to easy to murk so he sent me to do his bidding
8/10
44 - 6 = 38.000000 HAD to subtract ur worst scored bar because u have 12 lines to his 10

11-4? wit what? newbies?...only 4 vets have battled u
it's true...add another merk in crew just like eyeque
8/10
Noabuse? he's 2-12 I hope u coulda merk'd that kid...
face the facts.wit out ya gramps emerge..u have no wins
7/10
Forget clappin..I could end this thread wit blanks-n-flares..
I even star' his avi^^look...Im right on top this panda bear
9/10 OHHHHHHHH NIGGA BAM!
It's simply clear..I was better than u even before i was x2
Thought u knew.u couldn't carey a win on me i ya name was drew
8/10
I could set the standard grass..Diverse still can't wip my ass
Leave diverse half-massed...please...drop another personal about my past
9/10 OHHHHHH
41.00000000000
CLOSE BATTLE GUYS BUT CARSON TAKES IT LIKE ITS HIS!

I cant seem to POLL ATM so ill just lay back in the shack, yall niggaz fix that crap. ---DRE

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Tight battle...

Diverse hit hard.. some good p.ersonal disses throughout, clean structure/flow etc...
Carson hit just as good, again nice persona ls etc... but it lacked something in my eyes tho.. maybe the overall structure did something but I was feelin' Diverse's alot more - The finisher was real nice... kinda a perfect closer... not a major hit as such but a great bar to end sh.it if you get me.. Carson's was similar in that way, kinda an anti-climax style finisher with real impact but it was outdone slightly...
C's personals were nice, but presented differently hindering the impact.. Diverse had some good wordplay, and each bar complimented the next really....
Overall a killer battle, pretty close, but in the end...

Vote - Diverse

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yo carson if i could i would vote for u, cause that shit was tight,
it flowed jus right..........................

Carson comes through with the W.

Diverse. Solid drop throughout. You had good personals, and all the basics were there. Wordplay, meta's, structure, and multi's.

Carson. You brought the basics as well, but what seperated our drop from his was the tenacity. You seemed like you wanted it more.

Carson Wins

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