OK...

Born - Some nice punches/personals here:

"Plenty of curtain calls, Avalon's always banned or retired...
But you were allowed back, so I guess biters are inspired."

but my favorite from your verse was:
"And fucka Wilson, he ain't here, cuz this Island has no balls."

but alot of your verse seemed like you weren't putting full effort into it... definitely worth the read though. I think if you focus more on those personals than the general disses, you would have murdered him. Not bad though


and Island - word... nice drop, especially
"At age 70 you’ve lost all competitiveness, your demise was obvious..."
LMFAO
"If life’s a bitch, you’re the euphoric interval between life and death..."
ILL AS FUCK
""down in the dumps" was ya parents' mood at ya birth and later where ya were found..."
AGAIN, JUST PLAIN MEAN LOL
"as far as party clothing, this guy aint the best one
cus hes like a fucking postcard, he always arrives with address on..."
OK, THAT'S ENOUGH... Jesus you murdered him.

good battle, Island just seemed liek he wanted this way more. Nice job

pz yall drop an honest vote on the battle in my sig. Thanks