wholly shit man this was dope cant wwait till i c ure collab verse

This was all good it was packed with quotables my fav was prolly this line

Perspectives of my lifes emotions constantly denied to believe
Declare everything normal as I choke everytime I try to breath

Very deep line, And i love deep shit,

Nice flow, - very nice had good internals, and u have a great ryme scheme

Nice lines here

So I concentrate on whats good but it leaves a blank page
Against evil loves a puberty issue..it's just another stage

Mmmmm lately i have been tryin to think of something positive to write about but its nearly impossible

Dope peice

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Soft focus

Whats the point of living?

The voices in my head Feat. Rule

Unlikely Alias

More Comming soon!

uppen for some feedback...it's long but i think you'll enjoy it..

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Open Mics
The Weathers Art
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108673
My Teenage Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104850
Secluded
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...851#post1148851
Open Your Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...461#post1157461