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01-10-04, 04:21 PM
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IP:
This was good but it was hard to read. I think you should seperate your bars for your piece so it can make more sense, and so readers don't et lost in the rap. Ohter than that it was good.
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01-10-04, 04:27 PM
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I was feelin some of the punchlines you came wit
keep your sit clever and it'll be all good checkout some of my shit too..1 - Da LyRicAL ViLLiaN
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01-10-04, 05:34 PM
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okedoke piece...everyone already sumed up how to fix it..from what i'm lookin' at now..pretty good...
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01-10-04, 05:39 PM
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haha poor breakdown compared to my long ass 1 but thanks for peepin
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01-10-04, 05:44 PM
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IP:
structure was great
flow was on point vocabulary was nice wordplay was ok overall it was an ok drop |
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01-11-04, 08:18 AM
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IP:
thanks....uppin
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01-13-04, 12:39 PM
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IP:
........im upping this....
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