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01-10-04, 06:21 PM
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don't sleep you dicks...
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Soft Focus Suicide Inc. RhymeVantage Def.Ill Ghost-Writers Retarded people's heads are to big..I'll be back with something just as funny as watching the Special Olympics..don't worry..
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01-10-04, 07:31 PM
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the actuall concept and ideas put into this was better than the writting but dont start to cry because that isnt necessarily a bad thing
anyway wording was booty...rhyme scheme was elementary to the fulles...definitely need to work on that mug a lot... |
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01-10-04, 07:32 PM
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*Tear Drops*...
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Soft Focus Suicide Inc. RhymeVantage Def.Ill Ghost-Writers Retarded people's heads are to big..I'll be back with something just as funny as watching the Special Olympics..don't worry..
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01-10-04, 09:36 PM
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this was out cold..but let me get this straight..Jake,Frank,Dwight, and Big Mike was all the same person..right..and it was like..the things that he did haunted him..because it's what he really did in his past..right?...this was tight as fuck..I really didnt notice it was all the same length until Cam pointed it out to me..this was a well rounded verse..no big errors or things missing..the vocab could have been a step up..but you tried to keep all the lines the same length, so I understand that..Dope..I will give it a ...9/10
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01-10-04, 11:36 PM
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^^^ohhh.. like that...upping for more replies please..
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Soft Focus Suicide Inc. RhymeVantage Def.Ill Ghost-Writers Retarded people's heads are to big..I'll be back with something just as funny as watching the Special Olympics..don't worry..
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01-10-04, 11:48 PM
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well I think this was very creative and talented peice and I enjoyed this open mic post and it was exciting 2 see some good shit in here......
Please people drop a honest vote on a battle that is getting slept on, http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104849
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01-11-04, 12:05 AM
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^^^that sounded..forced..lol...lookin for more feedback people...
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Soft Focus Suicide Inc. RhymeVantage Def.Ill Ghost-Writers Retarded people's heads are to big..I'll be back with something just as funny as watching the Special Olympics..don't worry..
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01-11-04, 12:04 PM
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I wonder how long I could push this for...?
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