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01-13-04, 12:17 PM
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Thanx dawg.
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01-13-04, 01:18 PM
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^ Uppin.
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01-13-04, 02:43 PM
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01-13-04, 03:40 PM
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Sleepers.
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01-13-04, 06:37 PM
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Uppin once more.
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01-14-04, 11:47 AM
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Last time.
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01-14-04, 02:25 PM
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01-15-04, 09:03 AM
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Yo the piece was ill and the topic wasc coo too. The flow ran smooth an all you know? keep it all up. Flow, Structure, Vocab all really good. Thanks on my feedback man. Hit me up!
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01-15-04, 11:31 AM
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Thanx dawg,yo everyone who gave feed i'll return the favor if i've not already.
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01-15-04, 11:42 AM
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..This was a dope piece..good flow..good content..good wordplay..good structure..haven't read many of your posts..but..I'll be on the look out~Peace..
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01-15-04, 11:45 AM
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No doubt appreciated dawg.Not posted for a while coz been busy with university shit but i'm back anyway lol.
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01-15-04, 12:03 PM
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Dopely done..like that word..
good flow with vocab.. multis were nice.. Not to long yet not to short..liked that.. Stayed on the content not brushing off.. props are givin to you Mr.West..
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01-15-04, 08:39 PM
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Your first verse...the flow was very good easy to follow, your starting line was great it grasped thereaders attention with the word usage also the way you put forth a girls type of devils mentality with being a mother and so on. that really brought power to that verse and showed a lot of common sence that we normally hide from. Great read for the start.
Second verse i felt lacked some...modivation...it wasn't as catchy...but after bout the first 3 lines....you both came well together and kept on fitting the puzzles pieces together. the ending was a great way to finish. i loved that south east north...then west must speak...that was cool. Over all this was honeslty a great drop. very well writtin and a good collab. for the second verse.
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01-15-04, 09:10 PM
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Appreciated dawg.
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01-16-04, 06:03 PM
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