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Old 01-21-04, 10:02 PM   #16
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damn homie this shit is fire............i was really feelin the imagery.........and the mutlis.........it flowed well from one line to the next..........the topic was tight, while many cats have tried, this is the first one ive seen that actually made a hot drop wit that topic........u should get into topical shit dawg, cause u mad ill..........
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Old 01-22-04, 12:07 PM   #17
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dis shit was hot pen i liked it and enjoyed readin.....u had good flow and multis wording of words was ight aswell all round it was dope i enjoyed the read
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Old 01-22-04, 03:10 PM   #18
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eveything waz dope now read mine
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Old 01-23-04, 11:12 AM   #19
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If anyone is sleepin on Penskills... You are fuckin retarded... Kid is hot...


this is probably the most indepth piece I've seen... It's about time someone on this site posted something with meaning...


Keep this up...



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Old 01-23-04, 11:23 AM   #20
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Nice...I really liked this one, any kind of rap listener would enjoy this 'cos it covers all aspects of it.
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Old 01-23-04, 05:29 PM   #21
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This was a very moving piece. a lot of good vocab and excellent flow. your metas and similies were worded good. definitly a great read.

Thnks for the feedback on mine...this was an enjoyable read.

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Old 01-23-04, 10:00 PM   #22
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..This thing is 10days old and I'm still getting love..thanks...
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Old 01-25-04, 02:10 PM   #23
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*Bao-ba Bao-ba......heart stops*
This was....this cant be put in words, no reply can sum this up perfectly...You musta been smoking the same thing Nas was when he made Illmatic...Nah, but this was insane. Nice multies, brilliant...Quote:Brilliant idea for a song...nice flow, good overall metaphor and wordplay....*bows down and worships* lol, Dope piece....
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Old 01-25-04, 03:26 PM   #24
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some good shit Penskills
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Old 01-27-04, 11:57 AM   #25
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Uppin this..cause I can...^^
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Old 01-27-04, 12:03 PM   #26
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no u can't now stop saying shit i say b4 i shoot you with my E-gun
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Old 01-27-04, 12:58 PM   #27
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i think this is one of your best peices ive read.... you handled the topic well and came at it strong... with a smooth flow... really got it across, i just sont like the 'centering' of the text... but good drop..... hit my latest
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Old 01-27-04, 01:26 PM   #28
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i was hoping that my reply would tell you something that you could value, something that somebody else hadn't already said..but i can't, all i will say is this..

I Love It..definition of Dope....
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Old 01-27-04, 06:42 PM   #29
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^thanks.....I'm flattered.....
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Old 01-28-04, 12:39 PM   #30
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