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Old 01-14-04, 08:36 PM   #16
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dope homos..where are you?
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Old 01-15-04, 01:55 AM   #17
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I liked that piece... I come back for a visit and stop in to view an O.M. and happen to see someone mention me. That's pretty dope. It was good how you brought all the Legend's pieces in to make your verse. I respect the respect you've give to anyone in the Legends forum. Too bad I'm not a mod of the Legend's Forum or O.M. anymore. Aw well I deserve it for being gone for so long. Keep it up Sarcasm. I enjoyed this piece

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Old 01-15-04, 12:16 PM   #18
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Thank very very much for checking out this piece Domain..
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Old 01-15-04, 12:42 PM   #19
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"message it was sending, the concepts portrayed at the ending,
Though, my feelings on Weezy's "America" is still pending,"

^liked this bar alot,flowed well and used nice vocab.

As a whole the peice was a original idea,usin past legends to get there urself,wordplay was there in bits,flow was pretty good but as the others have said limit the fillers,i had the same problem tryna squeeze to much in.imagery was good aswell,vocab good too,internals so good drop man.

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Old 01-15-04, 12:49 PM   #20
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Well...Very nice piece, Lots of internals and all of that. Like said before, many filler words were thrown in.. Kinda fucked up the flow. But this was very very dope, You had a nice flow whenever you kept it strong and I like how you finally gave respect to the pieces posted in Legends. Very nice..
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Old 01-15-04, 12:53 PM   #21
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..thank u..all..
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Old 01-15-04, 01:20 PM   #22
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Old 01-15-04, 02:04 PM   #23
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Dopology..is my word...
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Old 01-15-04, 03:16 PM   #24
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Old 01-15-04, 04:52 PM   #25
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I wonder..when will the upping stop?
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Old 01-15-04, 06:59 PM   #26
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hey deac where u at?
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hahhaha.....you really do want to be in legends......Legends is nothing but dr'n because your a popular bastid.....anyways decent flow i enjoyed...ive seen better in you but this hit the lucky medium...congrats

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lol..dope!..lucky medium...
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Old 01-15-04, 07:26 PM   #29
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I've Never Actually Read Any Of Your Stuff, And To Be Honest, I Was Quite Impressed. Your Internals Were Nice And Flow Was Good In Most Areas. The Legends Idea Didnt Really Appeal To Me At First, But I Liked What You Produced Out Of It. A Nice Drop, I'll Be Checking Out More Of Your Stuff When You Drop Them.
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This Showed The Enjoyment You Have on This Site...

I Really Like How You Complemented The Peeps You Like On Here...My Big Inspiration is Emerge Too Me His art is Absolutely Phenomenal...

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