poetictendenceez took this hella funny dawg... the other dudes punchs were a bit played. the 1st few bars were hella tight poetictendenceez. very creative wit it.
Seven can come harder than this cauz ive seen it. so dont come as weak next time dawg....

vote poetictendenceez

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uppin for some honest votes....not stupid-ass votes like LM's...explain your shit...peace

in my oppion even thoufgh i can't vote yet, i believe seven came with more direct punches, better metas, although poet had a nice flow, stayed balance. not too personal, but id give this one to 7.

first up...

se7en -

Ayo,
I roll over this bitch wit a tire, and go straight through the wire
He couldn’t burn rhymes, if he set a Dr. Suess book on fire
^ LMFAO!!! hott opener

So question, this situation that I keep trying and pressin’
I use my words wisely and he uses his as a suicidal weapon
^ nice punch, aint nuthin werse than if ya werds kill you lol

Rejection, he’s gonna spit by 12, writing 5 hours to himself
Wouldn’t help, if he soled his soul 2 Satan while he vistied hell
^ lol nice punch.. i like tha writing 5 hours part, cuz alot of ppl like to take hours to write they shit lol. and its fuckin gay!

OOO well, maybe Grade A shit, so let’s say OK bitch
He thinks he’s bad wit 200+ posts, turned into 200 gay spits
^ this wuz weak

Se7eN will rip ya, eat ya, and squat and go ahead and shit ya
Because my punches tend to hit ya where the Lord split ya
^ lol.. nice shit

So keep calm, while I drop ya a lyrically blowing up bomb
Remove you from this site and it still will be rapbattles.com
^ nice punch! saying he aint shit to tha board.

IGHT.... NEXT UP!..

poetictendencies -

nobody loves to hate you, and nobody hates to love you
in fact nigga, no one's really thinking of you
^ moron... you just said.. EVERYONE LOVES HIM! you worded it wrong homie.

haha, i already merked you, with only two goddamn lines
you're whole crew's worthless, like a paralyzed mime
^ maybe his crew is werthless, but chu aint merk him, you told him we all love him. lol

i'd give you all your lyrics, and even a fuckn gat
even with both, you couldn't put a hole in my back
^ finally, i nice line.

clack clack, is the sound from the lyrics you flow
your rhymes are empty, unlike your boyfriends asshole
^ LMFAO!!! eww! lol... nice punch!

you're a perverted mother fucker, killing emcees when you "spit right"
shit dawg, you spit first, and didn't even put up a fight
^ nice line, but weak punch

fuck spittn a rhyme and becoming a soldier with time
i'm already a goddamn coronel, you're a fuckn private of mine*
^ thaz a hott line! and i get tha private part lol... more lines like this and you mighta won. lol

My vote - SE7EN... he had more punches, and they hit harder. poetical worded his shit wrong and said we all love se7en, so that kinda helped um out lol...

anyway, there's my vote.

PEACE!!!
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uppin (3)......u know what was meant dood..but alright, thanks for all the feedback..peace

Seven hit those personals and hit em well...

Flowed tight, format was on, rhyme scheme was hittin.

Poetic was aight and hit a bit harder...

But that alone don't win everything..

For one, your opener's end rhyme was "you"...

Then ya went and rhymed it with..."you".

Could ya get more simple?

"Mime" is played, most anything concerning "gats" are played.

The whole verse was kinda blah.
(cept for the "asshole" line, I'll give ya that one)

The rest were straight forward insults.
No wordplay, no decent metas, no complexity.

Seven didn't floor me with his creativity or complexity either...

But he did his research...

I love personals in battle.

They make so much more impact than straight disses.

Peace

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90+ views and only 6 votes come on people juss poll and expain it enough that we understand, well thanx and please vote, UPPIN VOTES x3

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I roll over this bitch wit a tire, and go straight through the wire
He couldn’t burn rhymes, if he set a Dr. Suess book on fire
^^weak opener...and very played concept
So question, this situation that I keep trying and pressin’
I use my words wisely and he uses his as a suicidal weapon
a lil better than the opener...it's aight
Rejection, he’s gonna spit by 12, writing 5 hours to himself
Wouldn’t help, if he soled his soul 2 Satan while he vistied hell
^^makes no sense....two different ideas
OOO well, maybe Grade A shit, so let’s say OK bitch
He thinks he’s bad wit 200+ posts, turned into 200 gay spits
^^weak lines...sorry
Se7eN will rip ya, eat ya, and squat and go ahead and shit ya
Because my punches tend to hit ya where the Lord split ya
^^nice flow N multis...but that's it...no punch
So keep calm, while I drop ya a lyrically blowing up bomb
Remove you from this site and it still will be rapbattles.com
^^weak closer....it was worst than the opener..

On the real playa I think that you're havin a problem with concepts......you got ya structure and flow down but ya punches need some work....keep elevatin...



nobody loves to hate you, and nobody hates to love you
in fact nigga, no one's really thinking of you
^aight...could've been worded better
haha, i already merked you, with only two goddamn lines
you're whole crew's worthless, like a paralyzed mime
^^1st line's filler....second is played
i'd give you all your lyrics, and even a fuckn gat
even with both, you couldn't put a hole in my back
^^weak punch
clack clack, is the sound from the lyrics you flow
your rhymes are empty, unlike your boyfriends asshole
^^played concepts
you're a perverted mother fucker, killing emcees when you "spit right"
shit dawg, you spit first, and didn't even put up a fight
^^could've went somewhere with that but not much of a hit
fuck spittn a rhyme and becoming a soldier with time
i'm already a goddamn coronel, you're a fuckn private of mine
^^simple rhyme scheme....nothin special for a closer

overall ya verse was blah....you had the only real punch of the battle which was your opener....everything else was blah to me..... a lil bit of a stronger verse than Se7en but it could've been better......

vote-Poet...

uppin' votes x4 welp come on people need votes to have win or loss your choice but juss vote Uppin' x4

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se7ev got this..
harder punches..try to think of some punches or clever disses..the boyfriend line made me laugh..but my advice..but anyway..se7ev gets my vote

keep elevatin both of yas



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