aight... thanx for the vote guys, and remember if you have 70 posts, u can poll a vote... but this is my 3rd uppin... gotta keep my talking to a minimum, peace

Lethal takes this even though his format and all the @?!^#%@ crap he added herbed the shit outta the verse and completely fucked your flow all up.

How am I suppossed to flow when you have an herbish explanation under each line?

You don't think that's gonna fuck it up some?

If you honestly think you're sooooooooooooooo much smarter than the rest of us...

Use the Cliff Notes format and put all those un-needed as fuck explanations at the bottom of ya thread.

Damn, that shit's irritating.

Still, you came more original than D-realist.
He fed off your verse on more than one line.
I hate that cuz there's almost no talent involved.
Plus, you waste punches, cuz you spent your time contradicting what he'd rapped to you.
Instead of hitting him freshly.

Nice wordplay and metas displayed by Lethal.

D, ya had some nice flow, format was much better, just come original.
Your personals were on, but they were mostly just feeding.

Decent battle, both need some work, but ya'll dont suck.

Peace

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''D couldn't be a higher man'' if he was known to ''Piss-Helium''......B1tch,''I Display More Punches'' Than The Modern Day ''Fist-Museum''////
Ehh
''Stab D in Da Eye Wit A Spear'' Just So He Can Have A Good ''Point-Of-View''.....Dudes like ''Elderly CrackHeads'' Becuase His ''Joints Are Used''////(Joints=Old People Haves Joints and Crack Heads Smoke Joints)
So-So, Dont need to explain it in ya verse though
You'de Think I ''Gambled Wit Deli Meats'' The Way I ''Cheat-Ham''......D Known to ''MasterBate The Loss'' Because He Always Claims He's ''Beat-Man''////(He Wants To Be Beat--Ewww)
Herbish
''I've Just Broken D'' Better Call the Technition Cus He's a ''Disfunctional-Fan''......Cuz ''D Known To Use Reverse Physcology'' Like ''Malfuntional-Glands''////
(Glands and Physcology Are to do with emotional feelings)
Decent
''D Collecting Magazines'' only time he ''Has-Issues''.....Dudes like ''Feminine Products'' Becuase He's only ''Miss-Used''////(Miss--Women- Used--Women Using Product)
Umm....ok i guess
''Lethal Is Like The Flame Of A Candle'' Becuase Im Always ''Above-Wacks''(wax)....''Soaking His Verse In Salt Water'' Think D Got Tough-Raps////(Did You Know u can make a rope of ash with salt water?).(Tight Huh?)
Yea...it wasnt too bad
Took Ya Verse and Abort-It,''D The Sentence''? Fvck I've just ''Broken-This-Predicate''.....Because Im the ''Pepto Bismal To D'' im here to End-Ya-Sh1t////(He's Unbeatable)
Blah Closer

Leathal - work on ya struct....write ya rhymes 1 rhyme per line, not in bars and drop that // shit, also explain at the end of the verse, not in it

D

I'm happy I read other peoples battles, cause that was a disgrace
cause i probably wouldn't have joined if that was my first taste
What...
what's the world coming to all talent is spent
I'm sorry dawg, that shit didn't make any sense.
Ok i guess
You try to be clever when you just look confused
from the "ehh" at the end you knew you would lose.*
Umm...ok
fist museum?, what the fuck is that shit
you came so late and all you plucked was that whack shit?
yea..he did, not the greatest punch
I'ma end this shit quick
by the way, CRACKheads usually dont smoke joints
told you he's confused that proves my point.
Didnt need the first line, blah to the 2nd and 3rd
And yea you better go call the technician
cause technically your flow's missin
No...yours is
who are dissin, cause its not me
you sound foolish, all those times you say "D"
No...your name is D, hows that foolish
I would give you some props if you actually made sense
soaking my verse in water? thats dirty (lmao) you should give it a rinse.
Decent
you're too young you should come mow my lawn**
You're lucky you said 20 lines cause I could go on
I could diss you longer than a marathon
Ok...dont, please, this was wack enough already, and again, no need for the 3rd line

D- work on ya flow, keep all the lines the same length and work on ya punches

Overall - Lethal...even though his struct was shit, his punches took this.

Both of you need elevation, i suggest takin a look at WEC

aight... uppin for the fourth time on this sleeped on battle... UPPIN!!!!!!!!!!!!

Ok, I learned my lesson. This was my first battle so I wasn't really aware of the no feeding thing. My bad. Good battle though. I wouldn't mind battling lethal again and maybe slik shadow too. I'll definately come harder next time. And I wont feed at all. We can blind spit.


Does anybody know how to close a battle? I have another battle open that nobody is voting on because I think it might be too long. Somebody please drop that knowledge on me. I'm still learning. Peace.

come on damnit... this is my last uppin i got for this battle... come on... drop a link and ill count a vote (cant poll, only got bout 60 posts...) but ill drop my thoughts... peace... UPPIN # 5

Structure-Lethal
Punches-Lethal by far
personals-Lethal, but this one was close
wordplay-lethal
Hands down LethalNJectionz

V/LethalNJectionz
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=106459
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=106604

^^^^^upping for the 4th time^^^^^^^

come on people get this shit over with. its been up for like 3 days already.

^DQ'ed for upping SIX times... not four as you counted.
-Axe