OK Man This Piece Wuz Very Dope It Deserves To Be A Legend, The Imagery Wuz Amazing It Felt Like This Wuz A Real Story, Flow Wuz Very Nice, Vocab Wuz Juss Off The Chain, Overall I Dont Think That You Can Do Any Better Than This If You Do I Will Be Amazed.

Alright, Ed, this was a really good piece the flow was really good, I could read from top to bottom with out having to slow down to catch the flow, so I really like this piece it had good content, vocab and everything.. good work

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...Izzo..Upper.

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..This was very nice..nothing seemed out of it's place..I'll keep it short..this was DOPE!!!!..haven't read very many open mics from you..but..I'll sure be looking forward to it...

That was nice dogg, ..........deep as hell

^ Yea i agree.. o.O

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yea i think this is really good....i really liked this heaps....i liked Your Flow very Much It was very Consistant....i think it had very Nice Vocab and the Discription madde really good imagery....this is the only piece i have read of yous and im impressed i think this had really god structure.....The Story Line was really good to...i nominated it because of most of these things but its the Way u posted it that made it really enjoyable like i havent really read some thing thats been Writen so well....i Really enjoyed it man keep em commin....Consider this Upped....PeacE....