Im bout to open the book of bitch and write a new chapter
for a technician ya skillz is that of a broke rapper,
^^ alright punch 6/10
ya lyrics like porn for gays stuck on too much dick
my shit's used to eatin pussies got that cunning linguist shit,
^whack 2/10
swung and missed when I stood there and gave you a free hit,
there's no arousal in ya punches like puss wit no clit,
^ok 5/10
i battle front lines, this bitch nigga plays hopscotch on streets,
but it's nap time bitch ya sleep increases ya defeat,
^whack 3/10
now i could give ya ass a warning or beat ya punk ass wit a bat,
or hand u back ya broke ass lyrics and tell ya fix that,
^alright 5/10
21/50 = 42 percent
Pretty whack..

I rush this fuckin newb with witty lines that tower his verse
Rhymes only run clean and smooth when I shower ur words
^Alright, 5/10
I try a little yes, but you beat yourself like in the middle of sex
Spit on ya quest, rip on his fasion cuz I see this kid in a dress
^Ok 5/10
I think your confused, you told me that you wanted the win
The drink u refused, allowed me to make your head do a spin
^whack 3/10
My punchlines hit so hard they put the pressure on like crunchtime
Your left in dier straights and my guesture is always to jumplines
^mmm okay 4/10
Wishin for sick with a fisherman's Stix, this a walk thru the river is thick
I deliver it quick hit ya liver wit bricks, there now I left you literlly sick
^okay.. 7/10

24/50 = 48 percent
Another whack attack..

Technician edged this by a bit..

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v/ technician

reason - the other kids shit was ok.. neither one of you right here came your best i doubt. reason being that there werent too many attempts at punches in this battle, you both just had a lot of filler. its ok i guesss, i woulda liked to see more good punches.

Da Kid: ur shit was ok. what he has, that you did not were multies... if ur not gonna have great punches or metaphors, at least have some multies to show us sumthin good in ur verse. ok verse...next time elevate & show us some shit...

technician: you didnt have the best punches either, or even very many if i remember correctly... your shit was ok too... you win this battle solely because your multies throughout kept it more interesting than his was.

both of you vote here or i will kill you:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...486#post1104486

breakdown

structure-tech
flow-tech
punches-tech
I try a little yes, but you beat yourself like in the middle of sex
Spit on ya quest, rip on his fasion cuz I see this kid in a dress
personals-neither
similies-both
complexity-da kid
creativity-tech
multiples-neither
vocab-neither
humor-dakidd
ya lyrics like porn for gays stuck on too much dick
my shit's used to eatin pussies got that cunning linguist shit,
vote-tech

good battle but tech overall came better good shit from u both

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upppn.......................damn poelpel slepppppppp

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flow- technician
punchlines- technician
overall verse consistensy- technician
metas- technician
multies- techinican
overall vote- technincian

hit up this battle with a vote then ill poll vote in this battle

heres the link http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108219

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yo tech took this but barely tech man i miss when you used to try it used to be fun to read your battles lately you just drop shit that barely wins when i know you can merk....anyway this battle was tech's because he had harder punches that were hitting more personal and thats my favorite kind so that is a big category to take...plus he took the regular punches category also which only leaves remiadial shit da killa kid....nice wordplay on a couple occasions but you had to come harder to take this.....both hit these up....

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108225

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=107655

^its all good.......i know when i need drop dope...........

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vote - kid, he definetly won, the other dudes raps just sounded real gay when i was readin 'em and if that " My punchlines hit so hard they put the pressure on like crunchtime" was the best lyric he sucks, the plural form wasn't right and the first time over i didnt even know he was rymin the shit.
so definetly i vote -kid

Technician - Vote
Way Better Punchlines Inside Of This Battle..He Came Out More Complex With The Punchlines, Just Didn't Really Have Much Multies Or Flow..On The Other Hand..Da Kid Had A Pretty Consistent Flow Inside Of The Verse But Didn't Have Them Punchlines...So My Vote Goes To Techincian For Better Punchlines...





Return The Favor..
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108336

uppppppppnnn for that last vote ..............................

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