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VanIllabymidnite | 3 | 75.00% | |
KLO! | 1 | 25.00% | |
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01-31-04, 07:17 AM | #16 |
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IP: 93F1 33ED
Punches: Vanilla
Wordplay: Neither Meta’s: Vanilla Creativity: Neither Personals: Neither Flow: KLO Multi’s: Neither Vote: Vanilla This was an ok battle. Vanilla started the battle off wit a pretty decent verse, your first lines were kinda wack but you started to come harder close to the end. You had some pretty nice punches but your wordplay could be alot better. KLO's verse was kinda simple. He didn't have any punches, plus his wordplay was bad. I had to go wit Vanilla overall though cause his verse packed more punch. Favorite Lines: Your like a woman that wipes wrong, your clit stinks bad.. Next thing you know your fans are gone, like pinks fad.. POLL VOTE ON MY BATTLES http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111064 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108481 |
02-03-04, 08:34 PM | #17 | |
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IP: 5E48 7779
Vanilla you had a pretty nice verse and a chance of winning until i saw KLO"S closer. Ya lines were a little simplistic at best. KLO's weren't too much more creative but it was the way he dropped em. vanilla had the better structure and flow but that won't win you a battle. KLO you need to even out your lines a bit cause it throws you off. Vanilla could've won if ya closer was a bit better, and ya punches were a bit harder.
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02-03-04, 09:00 PM | #18 | |
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IP: 64C2 D7B2
van
KLO! take that L out and that's how it'll go.. Just one punch from me and I'll get a nice KO.. first line was good..2nd basically same thing I don't know this kid, but I know he's new.. Easly explained, from day one it was threw.. not really a punch Tryed to make your flows neon to make them glow.. Made a damn of words thats made to stem a flow.. not really a direct punch in the 2nd line.. Lookin at you like a semi auto-matic weapon, not spittin fast.. Come threw like speed racer, I see you just sittin gettin past.. decent punch...not bad Your like a woman that wipes wrong, your clit stinks bad.. Next thing you know your fans are gone, like pinks fad.. lol..good punch You tryin to spit like a gun fight at the OK Coralle.. The clock hits high noon, that's the end of your profile.. ok closer to finish it KLO It's the K to the L to the O to the exclamation point. My punctuation gets applause while your sentences dissapoint. just a so-so opening..1st line was lame and no punch..2nd was just a basic punch You could write a whole novel and only get bad reviews while what I wrote on my shopping list could make the evening news. punch was decent..i liked the idea Don't fuck with me, I'm like a dog that's been abused; I'll piss all over your house, your clothing, and your CDs too. not feelin it..koncept wasnt good and punch wasnt either If my rhymes are Jesus Christ, then yours are Brittney Spears; They'll devote whole days to me while you'll be dated in years. another not direct punch and basic too Even if you went back in time and killed me before I dropped this verse I'd still murder your ass 'cause your battling skills are the worst. another basic concept and meh punch vote - Van..i didnt feel KLO's verse.. vans punches were harder and more complex, KLO didnt come very hard and alot of his verse was basic and not a direct punch which wasnt hard hitting
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02-10-04, 02:42 AM | #19 |
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VanIllabymidnite vs. KLO!
IP: A965 0752
I dont have enough posts to officially vote but here's my thoughts:
Flow- Both had good flow & structure, so Id say it was a tie in this category Punches- This is where the battle was really decided. KLO had a decent punch or two, but most just didn't hit hard, and lacked any real creativity. VanIlla' also didn't have any punches that were that special, but had a good opener. Seemed a little flat in the middle... but again he came on strong w/ the closer. VanIlla gets this category, for using more creativity and hitting w/ harder punches. Personals- VanIlla gets this too, with the nice opener and because KLO didn't have any. Vocab- Tie. Basic from both Creativity- VanIlla. KLO had nothing that seemed that original except for the shopping list line. Not that VanIlla' blew hit out the water with his creativity, but his ideas didn't feel quite as played as KLO's. Overall- VanIlla takes this with harder hitting punches, a good personal to start the verse and for using more creativity. |
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