Fresh Emcee had more punchlines that hit far harder... he flipped words very well and his wordplay was very good.... heartless needs to elevate his punchlines if he wants to win, but he had a decent verse and his pastor punch was pretty good...

vote = fresh emcee

vote on this please with an honest vote... thanks

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109734

come on uppin pplz.............................................. .....................................

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flow/structure-
goes to saint, he was more concistant with multis and his lines weren't as stretched while fresh didn't have any multis and a few stretched lines

multis/rhyme scheme-
no doubt goes to saint, fresh didn't have any multis, but he almost had a nice rhyme scheme... saint had multis with an average rhyme scheme

punches/personals-
was close, but i give it to fresh... u guys do u need work with this... saint had a nice line about the coke, but the rest of his were weak.. fresh had more average punches yet none hit too hard however he had a few personals, and saint didn't have any... one good punch without anything else can't win u a battle i'm afraid

opener/closer

opener goes to saint
closer goes to fresh
since saints opener was better than fresh's closer, i'm giving it to saint

overall-saint by a hair


since i took the time to vote, plz hit the battle in my sig up... it's getting slept on like hell

uppin, lets get this closed............................................ ..............................

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come on ppl uppin to get this motherfuka closed...............dont sleep on it......................

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decent battle both should be elevating....
fresh: good punches like your metas and wordplay....flow was good .....struct was a little stretched lose the quotes....your personals were attempted....punches hit hardly tho...good verse......14/20

saint : nice verse as well ....struct on point....lose quotes too tho...personals were blah...decent at best....punches...didn't quite feel where you were goin with Some of them...but inded they were good...hard hitting if not played....flow was good.....good verse all around....but not enuff i think 11maybe12/20

vote - fresh ......
hit up my battle with wise ways.......

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