This is just part of the reason I removed you from the elite list.

I've seen other battles that just aren't as dope as the one you showed me.
Until I see that again.. You're off the list.

and Brix is on probation right now.. I'm just going to wait until his next battle to decide

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You rite
I jus came w/ too many weak/Fillers
but I do come good..all my other battles here
are good
jus that I battle good heads and lose lol
Oh well..Spit'll be bk
Uppin

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hate to disagree but i think spit came good,, most punches were good and most of his wordplay too,,, bi detained came mediocre but showed some potential,, his lines were stretched though so he needs to sort his structure and try making his punches clever therefore hitting harder, i havent seen any of spitaculars other battles but i think off this one he deserves to have another chance in elite... but i aint the mod

so vote spitacular

I'm seeing things Spit's way as well...

Just thought he had a tighter verse...

That riddled BI with personals.

Nothin wrong with Brix's verse...

It was tight too, just wasn't near as personal.

Well, it was, but the shit was too round the bush for me...

Nothing hit direct, (like the Chrit line, it hit him first)...
(softening the effect to me)...

Spit was wittier and more effective cuz he just came right at his opponent.

That's all, dukes.

Peace

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this was very close

both of these verses were some what dissappointing

spit yur verse was just kinda lacking the hard hitting punches

it seemed to fall short with the personals

and you didnt attack him hard enough

BI yur very first line was dope

but then yur verse just started to go downhill,

the flow was a little off but thats not a huge deal

vote BIDetained cuz his verse was a little bit better

I know ya'll elite's probably don't care, but here's my two cents:

$pitacular: I thought your verse was great. You had good personals because you were able to go back. Made for good punches. Nice wordplay and good flow. Keep elevatin'.

B.I. Detained: Your verse was great, too. You had good personals and punches, but you just didn't come as strong as $pitacular. Good wordplay. Keep elevatin'.

I'm sure you both can do better like you say you can, but:

Vote: $pitacular

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Hot Streak vs. Tactixx (1-3)
Hot Streak vs. Genesis (0-0)

And, I respect your modness or whateva, Token, but I don't think that is really fair. Maybe he was just off his game that day. I don't know much about the elite, though.

And, Poppa Bean, just curious, but how did you get a custom avatar when you are a newbie? ^^^ Please PM me with the answer, or anyone else who knows.

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Hot Streak vs. Tactixx (1-3)
Hot Streak vs. Genesis (0-0)

BI gets this win

Spits lines were decent but nothing hard hitting...personals were ehh and 'quoting' isnt needed...

I'll make you Bleed Pussy, Period... wiggle my trigger Finger & Bang
leave you're Body Wet & Bloated... like your Name's B.I.Retained

did not rhyme to me...at all... so that was a definet problem...the punches were not that bad, just not that great

BI..
and this rhymes how?

your in Decline..I Hope Feebs sees this & Relegates back to your Origin
Spit deserves to be w/ all the Noobs..like Chrit w/ his Wins to None-Again

you had some decent punches, 1/4 assed was my fav...nothing great either but defiently more consistent

vote BI

/\he is british...you know them bloody bastards have lazy tongues



jk