UP #1. I just want this battle to be at the top, even though it's only four battles down.

*Giggles like a school girl*

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this was a very close battle....both verses were good but they seemed to be a lil bit rushed

token-u had a nice opener and closer....but your punches seemed to fall of in the middle of your verse...however u did have some nice creativity in your verse....but your punches just didnt land very well

my favorite bar=
You have nothing to Show For.. like a Butler without work
Although I'm finishing this with an Axe..
..I'm ending this sentence with a MERK


axe-i wasnt really feeling your opener but ya closer was tight...i felt your punches were more consistant throughout your verse u had some really good punches that were very funny....overall i think your punches just landed harder than tokens and your verse didnt seem to fall off

my favorite bar=
Token’s the antonym of dope… even his custom title’s running away.
People say that text is gay… no wonder text battling is Token’s forte!


my vote/axe......for more consistancy and harder punches...it was a very close battle though

both of you homos

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Ok, this was a decent battle.... but Toke, after the way you criticized my verse against B.I. in Elite, I really expected to see better from you... your punches were short and to the point, which is good, but I felt they didn't have a great impact - they were jabs instead of punches. Decent Opener, liked that, and you had another good punch (the 'mindless' one) but I think a couple of lines were wack (the steeple... c'mon man) and I have seen much better quality from you before. NOT a hate vote

Axe - First battle of yours I have ever read, and I was somewhat impressed. Punches were witty, but I think there were to many 'gay' punches/remarks. You said that 'gay jokes are played' which would have been fine for that specific punch/bar, but then you go on to use the whoel 'gay' thing twice after... (off his knees/his forte) which I thought was somewhat weak. Your verse was good though, and I felt that it took the battle this time because the quality of the punches was better than Toke's verse.


Both of you had decent personals, but I feel Axe came a bit harder

SO, my vote goes to Axiom.

I REALLY HOPE this constructive criticism is viewed as just that... and doesn't get me hated on more. Just trying to Keep RB voting active and give feedback to you guys.

pz

This is purely a hate vote.. you are still bitter about me taking you off the elite list. Vote gone. -Token

^No. A hate vote would be... XXX won this, Token you suck. But if you want to remove it, Young P's shall be removed too.
-Axe

Vote gone.
-Axe

Thanks for the votes people, 4-3, Uppin to finish.

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Meh sorry token , .. Amby came better , in this one...his punches were just harder & nicer to read, than urs, you had good verse but i was feeling Amby's lines more, .. they just hit harder, .. nice battle, .. good verses V/ Amby.

Blah... come on Edicus. Explain your vote better, set an example. Re-Opened before Toke does it.
-Axe

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Real close battle, and to be honest...
I'm a touch lost on Token's opener about Walter Wall...
I guess ya saying Axe ghostwrite's for him.
Hope so, don't wanna fuck up the personal.
But if so, isn't that the same diss as your Feeble one?
Some witty stuff, no doubt...
But against Axe's first 4 lines...
Man...
The Chuck E Cheese was kinda played, but the fact that his name is Token...
Was a nice flip.

Just think Axe came harder, funnier, and had more of it...

Token was cool, but I didn't feel he was hard enough...

The steeple line: funny, not hard.
The shave line: real creative, but no so much of a punch.
Third wheel line: again, eh...nice, but kinda soft.
Good concept, just didn't think the execution was there.

Only kinda close...

Peace

Axe

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i voted already...can you foo's hit this up...thanx

Best Line In Battle:
This kids so short of dope.. marijuana stands tall
The only time Axe's skill echos..
.. Is standing next to Walter Wall!
It was a killer personal sik meti4 an nice wordplay all in one

All in all.....
punches- Tie (both came hard an regular wit the punches..even distribution an quality)
flo- Token(His set better in my head, the lines connected alot better than axes)
wordplay- Token(along with the top one i showed he had some witty additions)
meti4's- Token(was pretty even in quality exept for the marijauna line on token's side)
personal's- Token( easy....played ass chucky cheese lines....i seen em 100x on token)

overall- Token
Honestly I dont think this was really close either, I think Token took it pretty handily

no hate an dont bann me axe
-1

^ Lol.. Axe can't bann

thanks for the honest vote.

uppin

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B2K didn't poll... I polled it. I win. Nevermind, he did poll but Token toke away Spitacular's vote. If you take his vote away, I take Young P's away.

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