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lm 5 71.43%
.:FiorZ:. 2 28.57%
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Old 02-04-04, 09:04 PM   #1
LyRiCaL GeEnUs
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Your bout as much use as a book wid no nouns or verbs
Thinkin your dope and good, leadin a wack crew of herbs
ok personal, kinda a played meta
I'll punch you to the kerb, kick your brain cells into gear
Been here almost a year, and still not started a rb career
ok
Show no fear, battle me, let me abuse your hidden record
Coz I've read your battles, but I fell asleep coz I got bored
ehh didnt rhyme in my head
Your crew gettin whored, your fallin, into sinkin sand
Coz we all know, that your the wackest rapper in england
lmao....ok...played
I stand tall over you, I write accapella, dont need no beats
And your wack, wont ever hear your voice on tha streetz...
played, but ok


Dischargin' Flows Like A Monsoon, To Leave This Crew Sunk
Bitch, You Think You Tough??...Man, You "Softer" Than A "Monk"
ehhh kinda whack
If Ma Whole Crew Was Blind, Then Ya Punches Still Missed 'Em
Cos My Spit's Leave Your "Crew" Crushed Up In An "Instant"
pretty good
Claimin' Ma Crew Is Weak, That Shits False Like Perjury
Plus Your Whole Crew Roster Is Faker Than Plastic Surgery
ok personal
Packin' More Heat Than A Shotgun thats Jus' Killed .:K:.
Oh No, Your Crew's Doomed Now, Hold On, It Was Anyway
ehh ok
Askin' Us To Battle, We Battlin' To Get Our Voice On Tha Streetz
Cos Like Vegetarian Burgers, You Just Aint Worth Tha Beef
good personal/punch

Hmm close call, I have to give this to FiorZ. He jus came with more witty punches and personals. LM jus came with too much played shit.

Please drop an honest vote here guys. Thanks http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112157
 
Old 02-04-04, 09:42 PM   #2
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OK, this should be in regular Front Lines... word

but I will have to go with LM - Fiorz ya punches were all played to hell. I can't even justify taking the time to give you a decent breakdown - because I will feel like I got ripped off for the value of my time.

both of you should be embarrassed.... that is all

drop an honest vote on me & Lyric's battle in this forum

pz
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Old 02-07-04, 08:05 AM   #3
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^................................................. ....................pz
 
Old 02-08-04, 07:52 AM   #4
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Uppin for votes.......
Lets get this finally over with
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Old 02-11-04, 06:20 PM   #5
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uppin 4 more votes...
lets get this shit closed now people

holla...
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Old 02-12-04, 01:05 PM   #6
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Uppin for votes (4).........................
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Old 02-12-04, 01:14 PM   #7
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upiin votes for ya'll, and i would vote but fiorz iz in my crew so i cant. good battle tho!!! pzzz
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Old 02-13-04, 01:24 PM   #8
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Uppin for votes (5)...............................
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Old 02-17-04, 08:28 PM   #9
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iight...

LM

Your bout as much use as a book wid no nouns or verbs
Thinkin your dope and good, leadin a wack crew of herbs
Nice opener... Straight to the point... Lol... 6/10
I'll punch you to the kerb, kick your brain cells into gear
Been here almost a year, and still not started a rb career
Very hard hittin personal... 8/10
Show no fear, battle me, let me abuse your hidden record
Coz I've read your battles, but I fell asleep coz I got bored
Not feelin it to be honest... 4/10
Your crew gettin whored, your fallin, into sinkin sand
Coz we all know, that your the wackest rapper in england
Nice enough... 5/10
I stand tall over you, I write accapella, dont need no beats
And your wack, wont ever hear your voice on tha streetz...
Good personal... 7/10

Overall... 31/50... Structure was good... Vocabulary wasnt bad... Flow was good... Punches where good... And some nice personals in there aswell... Good verse... Pz...


Fiorz


Dischargin' Flows Like A Monsoon, To Leave This Crew Sunk
Bitch, You Think You Tough??...Man, You "Softer" Than A "Monk"
Good opener... Good punch... 8/10
If Ma Whole Crew Was Blind, Then Ya Punches Still Missed 'Em
Cos My Spit's Leave Your "Crew" Crushed Up In An "Instant"
Not bad... Played... But not bad... 6/10
Claimin' Ma Crew Is Weak, That Shits False Like Perjury
Plus Your Whole Crew Roster Is Faker Than Plastic Surgery
What? 4/10
Packin' More Heat Than A Shotgun thats Jus' Killed .:K:.
Oh No, Your Crew's Doomed Now, Hold On, It Was Anyway
Not feelin it... 5/10
Askin' Us To Battle, We Battlin' To Get Our Voice On Tha Streetz
Cos Like Vegetarian Burgers, You Just Aint Worth Tha Beef
Badly worded... Self-glorification... 5/10

Overall... 28/50... Structure wasnt bad... Vocabulary was iight... Flow was off at times... Some iight punches... Some pointless shit... Not many personals... Decent verse... Pz...

v/ LM...

Punches hit harder... Less played... More consistent verse...


Both drop a vote here please...

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...020#post1193020

Thanks...

Pz...
 
Old 06-16-04, 09:30 AM   #10
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wow this battle has been upin for ages so im'a get it closed

vote LM
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