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02-02-04, 11:52 AM | #16 | |
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uppin number 4................STOP SLEEPING ON THIS.............................................. ...............................
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02-03-04, 02:02 PM | #17 | |
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uppin number 4................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ................
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02-06-04, 09:28 PM | #18 | ||||||||||
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Just giving an honest opinion:
(if you have any honor in you, you will!) jk I'll do this line by line: Black's open: Quote:
[BOLD]Decent, I kinda felt it , except, it was in no way directed personally[/BOLD] Streetzgullie's open: Quote:
[BOLD]wasn't really a bunch, basic multies, lil choopy[/BOLD] Black's Line 3,& 4: Quote:
[BOLD] it was an attempt at a punch, good structure, syllable count, etc[/BOLD] Streetz 's Line 3, & 4 Quote:
[BOLD] kinda basic, basic multies, could bee extended, for better flow[/BOLD] Black's Line 5, 6, 7,8 Quote:
[BOLD] I agree the 'Voice of the Streetz' line is played, dope structure, a better attempted punch,[/BOLD] Streez's Line 5,6,7,8 Quote:
[BOLD] still no punches, basic multies, better structure than the 1st lines[/BOLD] Black's close: Quote:
[BOLD] again better structure, better multies, decent vocab, decent end[/BOLD] Streetz close" Quote:
[BOLD] His 1st real punch, I agree AGAIN it is kinda played, but better than the open of the verse, AGAIN basic multies, choppy structure, [/BOLD] I got to give this to Blackgod: Black's weak points: more wordplay & vocab better punches Streetz weak points: structure, try to take those :: off the end it looks just as good, the same (extend structure and flow) could work on better multies, wordplay etc Both got to keep elevating I said this in another battle: Quote:
Keep that in mind! JamesJr.
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