Blaze

man its just blaze and i dont wanna murder u/
cause standin in your shadow is the only way u get the W(double you)/
Creative and not a bad opening with some wordplay
imma real spitter from chicago hommie/
u from l.a.?...well you'll get u ass beat like kobe/
Not really feelin it
c'mon now im the best lets not get this battle confused/
this guys a joke........ur shadow raps better than you/
not really feelin it
they call me jus blaze cause i love 2 spark it/
mess around and i'll put a reddot on ur shirt like u work for "target"/
Kinda played...
imma end shit -this nigga cant spitt/
im hitten em wit punches so much his favorite snaks is my FIST!
So-So Ending


Shadow

you say u blaze and get crazed u just realy dazed
from the punches i gave u like my slave ready to be
commanded and ime not black i heard u was white
as crack ile eat u like a snack matter fact i can rap
pick up yo slack ime tired of yo mom she got worn
and torn after my dick took her by strom six or
seven strokes than murder she wrote i thought
this fu was gonna choke whaten here drinking a
beer this fu is strait up queir yo feuture is clear
i won this fu is a dumb fuck ile give you your loss
so u can return to your boss and go lisen to yo
koss inatead of sony u use a brand called Fony
this fu is new and he already think he koo ime
the definishon of cruel.

I have no clue what so ever where ya lines started and ended... i tried to grasp the punches but it was difficult, fix ya struct, take a trip to Wackness Emergancy Center

Vote - Blaze becuase i couldnt read Shadow's at all, his punches were beter and hit harder

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damn MC got merked....he was just rhymin, u confused me n ur punches didnt hit hard at all and an all right flow...on the otha hand just blaze had the flow,punches, the whole 9....i felt every line he spat...vote--Just Blaze.........return the favor...........http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110266

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pictureperfect2 vs me..please vote

Yo, JUST BLAZE ripped this kid apart in every category hands down ..

vote - JUSTBLAZE


Best lines:

"c'mon now im the best lets not get this battle confused/
this guys a joke........ur shadow raps better than you/"

"man its just blaze and i dont wanna murder u/
cause standin in your shadow is the only way u get the W(double you)/"

"they call me jus blaze cause i love 2 spark it/
mess around and i'll put a reddot on ur shirt like u work for "target"/"

^^ stretched but nice concept


Those first 2 lines i quoted were aight, but you both need to elevate... JUST BLAZE was still wayyyyy above the other dude tho.....

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Intoxicated vs John

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Hit one of my battles up please...!!! thye need votes badly...

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Intoxicated vs .iLL.
Intoxicated vs John

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i need the votes....................................

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weak....
both need to elevate

okay

just- descent. period everything was moderate nothing too good but nothing whack
which got u the win this time

m.c.- Elevate. period work on EVERYTHING definally got some poteintial
good structure

overall- one sided. 'Just Blaze'

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. next time vote right, yo - Feeble Minded

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Nuff Said

upp this shit.............................................. ..............................

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man its just blaze and i dont wanna murder u/
cause standin in your shadow is the only way u get the W(double you)/
bfirst line sucked..second line was dope[/b]
imma real spitter from chicago hommie/
u from l.a.?...well you'll get u ass beat like kobe/
played to hell
c'mon now im the best lets not get this battle confused/
this guys a joke........ur shadow raps better than you/
ehh..dun use yourself in ya rap
they call me jus blaze cause i love 2 spark it/
mess around and i'll put a reddot on ur shirt like u work for "target"/
read above...weak meta
imma end shit -this nigga cant spitt/
im hitten em wit punches so much his favorite snaks is my FIST!
decent


you say u blaze and get crazed u just realy dazed
from the punches i gave u like my slave ready to be
dun rhyme, weak multis..no punch
commanded and ime not black i heard u was white
as crack ile eat u like a snack matter fact i can rap
weak
pick up yo slack ime tired of yo mom she got worn
and torn after my dick took her by strom six or
played as fuck
seven strokes than murder she wrote i thought
this fu was gonna choke whaten here drinking a
weak
beer this fu is strait up queir yo feuture is clear
i won this fu is a dumb fuck ile give you your loss
so u can return to your boss and go lisen to yo
koss inatead of sony u use a brand called Fony
this fu is new and he already think he koo ime
the definishon of cruel.
awful flow..weak attempts at punches

Just Blaze wins this. Harder punches and better flow and creativity..that W line was nice.
Know yall can't vote yet..but please drop an honest opinion here. Thanks
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110513

lol mmm both need to elevate a lot..

just blaze - had some sort of flow goin on there, punches weren't hard , need to work on metaphors and shit

MCshadow....ya need to get some practicin in before ya decide to get into a battle


but ya both were entertaining,

vote = just blaze

1 more pleasemmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm

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whoa peolple vote please.....................................

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