Both verses were pretty close, but lyrics set up was better and he had better punches. snaps shit was sorta played and just not attention getting, you wanna make the person feel the punches, not laugh at them. my vote goes to lyric.
Pz.

ok I think lyric took thiz one, snap got the right idea and shit but he needz to elevate... so do I so don't take that shit the wrong way... lyric had some better punchez. Snap's closer was going the right way but ended kinda bad... "creat" ure is not a word .
vote - Lyric

plz vote on thiz:
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Snap

Ima knock your dick so far in u can call it a clit/
so sit, and realize this new presentation I spit/
Not really a punch....blah opening
I may be new to rappin and rhymes, but crack open the Times/
and notice ".snap.", front page, dazzlin minds!/
diss him..not everyone else....meh
Lyric's shit is over-played, like rainbow hair-do's/
the only time you 'get involved' is watching Blues Clues!/
lmao...played and dumb...nice try though
Just admit that your rappin intelligence is oh so artificial/
This niggah blows more men then a referee blows his whistle!/
so-so..ya best punch yet
Its time ta delete this weak elite piece of meat/
superglue his seat and beat this meak lyric~al creat(ure)/
You called him weak and elite at the same time, wak ending wit the creat(ure)


Lyric



Told ya neck I was battlin ya and it was like 'snap!'
You a fake emcee made up of whackness and crap
ok opening
Your call stated that you'd waste any who replied
Your anutha kid from Cali, but I doubt your rep West Side
not really a punch at all
Like a drive-by with spit balls, your rap brings no force
You a wannbe textee, from writin ya voice gets hoarse
punch was blah... 1st line was better then 2nd
My punches all connect, while you gave a decent try
But you must be in the Airforce son, ya punches did fly-bys
you say drive by before, now flyby, this was jsut so-so
Nothin you threw hit and ya verse is completly played
The best punch ya ever threw was..uh...your..um.gay
decent closer

Overall - both verses were very weak but lyric did take this, keep elevating guys

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Personal Punches - Lyric had the better punches
Vocab - Both mcs used basic words. But the location of the basic words mad the difference in this battle. The arrangement of the words was dominated by Lyric.
Flow - Lyric dominated the flow category
Wordplay - Snap dominated the wordplay field. Most of his verse was ILL in the wordplay field

I vote Lyric. This was a very close battle though...... Very nice verses from both battlers

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Mystic (Traitor)

Ima knock your dick so far in u can call it a clit/
so sit, and realize this new presentation I spit/
An unexciting opener. You see a nice opener, or a decent one is what keeps the voter wanting to hear more. In this case, an elitest rhymer might read this, and not even give the rest of your verse a chance. But i'm not a person like that, because there is always the chance of a slow start and a great finish.
I may be new to rappin and rhymes, but crack open the Times/
and notice ".snap.", front page, dazzlin minds!/
This isn't a diss of any sort. It's best to keep going for the jugular. Using one's name, icon, sig, or whatever is your best bet in a diss against them.
Lyric's shit is over-played, like rainbow hair-do's/
the only time you 'get involved' is watching Blues Clues!/
a decent punch.
Just admit that your rappin intelligence is oh so artificial/
This niggah blows more men then a referee blows his whistle!/
decent punch. The use of 'Oh So', is kinda corny, no offense.
Its time ta delete this weak elite piece of meat/
superglue his seat and beat this meak lyric~al creat(ure)/
the ending is off. Often in rap, one can cut off words, or pronounce them wrong and get away with it. But in this case, it doesn't seem too nice doing so.

a decent verse though, all in all

Told ya neck I was battlin ya and it was like 'snap!'
You a fake emcee made up of whackness and crap
That first line was nice, it's an opener that'll keep you reading.
Your call stated that you'd waste any who replied
Your anutha kid from Cali, but I doubt your rep West Side
hmmm...Left in the dark on this one. Are you saying he's not from cali, or he doesn't rep it right? not too nice.
Like a drive-by with spit balls, your rap brings no force
You a wannbe textee, from writin ya voice gets hoarse
nice on the spitballs line
My punches all connect, while you gave a decent try
But you must be in the Airforce son, ya punches did fly-bys
uh huh.
Nothin you threw hit and ya verse is completly played
The best punch ya ever threw was..uh...your..um.gay
unsatisfying closer, but your verse will suffice. It is decent over all. I feel like, you felt it was just enough to beat him. I could see iller shit coming from you.

So overall, Lyric i feel got this one, although i wouldn't say he eclipsed snap, but it's a definate win though. I like the format that Snap took though.

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Maku JaiiLiin the ominous vs. Chugs4life

yo this battle was re-opened so we each have 5 more ups. 4 for me now. Uppion#1

Snap came with plenty of multi's...

But really only one good punch.
("refree/whistles" was nice)...

But that was about it, focus was on flow...
Punches lacked. So did wordplay.

Lyric threw what was necessary to win.

Came with personals, witty wordplay, and harder punches.
Plus, his structure was much tighter.
Lots of nice metas, (the "driveby" was pretty nice).

Just better and more impactful stuff from Lyric.

Peace

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