- your structure needs some work, dont need to CAP YA PUNCHES and try to make it so your lines are about the same length. when you got started your punches were good From there it got worse wit soome kinda played punches.. you had alot of multis which arent needed, try to not focus on them and just focus on makin ya punches more complex and adding metas to them

Kilo opener wasnt that great... it was just ok, it did get better though witr some of your creative and origional punches..your structure was better then but it wasnt the best. you dont need to """ around ya punches etc and you did have some un even lines...it wasnt bad though. your ending was good and it made up for your begining.

this was a close battle but ima have to go wit Kilo, he had an overall better verse

good battle guys, keep it up

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img onna have to go with kilo..miley ur shit was mad funny..structure was nice..and you stayed away from the obvious name flips that most people use on kilo..name flips suck when they get used to much...and i thought you had this battle for sre when i read it..but then i read kilo's..kilo's verse was nice..yet he shouldnt use so many smile references...still i think he won this..

v/kilo

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uppin to get this shit closed.......................good battle smiles..............................

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I liked both of ur verses, but...

Smiley: Ur verse was good. I liked ur metas and personals. Okay punches and all. Nice creativity. Keep elevatin'.

Kilo: Ur verse was good. I liked ur metas and personals, but some of ur punches seemed kina indirect to me. Good creativity. Keep elevatin'.

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Feeble Minded

Vote: Smiley

Structure: Dunno....neither had the best structure
Vocabulary: Kilo
Multi:
Punches:
Creative: Kilo
Fun Factor: Both Kinda Dull...

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Because Kilo would of had em....but it seem like he was stalling to throw out his punches and your lines was decent....but went straight to the point...and came straight at chu with no extra lines that didnt need to be needed....keep ya head up Kilo you nyce as hell....and i know you better than this...and im a newbie....Big up to both of yall

real nice battle here i liked both verses, but kilo came a little bit better so my vote goes to him

"Look, This forum ain't McDonalds...It isn't now and never was
This guy only loves to smile because herbs are all he does" my fav line, it had me rollin

"real nice battle here i liked both verses, but "kilo" came a little bit better so my vote goes to him"

i made a lil typo, my vote goes to t west i put in the wrong name, srybout that

yo ite this is how i saw this 1,
kilo had a nice verse..ive seen you elavate alot man,
your punches were nice and clever but i got them.lol.
nicer structure werk on personals and flow(came abit streched on places)
smiley-this was ite but ive seen so much better from you,
your structure wasn't good dont CAPS