how about no?.....now stop freeposting...



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it's like tennis...back..forth...back..forth...this is great..

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^^^sorry i meant to put my actual vote on that post as well.....my opinion is that while neither of you dropped especially nice, emerge still took this one...he had more creative punches and better personals...derive your verse wasn't bad but some of your lines were kinda played....all in all i've seen both of you drop better but emerge takes this one, his verse was better

Poorly explained. Doesn't count.
-Axe

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aight ima have to go with emerge on this one because of better punches and betetr personals

hit punches hit harder were mopre consistant and were more direct

also his sturcture was nice and his flow was better

no hate here just an honest vote..
v/emerge
hit up the battle in my sig please

Also poorly explained.
-Axe

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vote you fucking whores!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

derive-nothing personal cuz but ya verse wasnt all that great....your punches were kind of soft......and sex punches are played as hell and u seemed to have a lot of them in your verse....u had a couple good lines but the sex jokes just werent cuttin it....get more creative next time.........decent verse 6 1/2-10

emerge-u had a nice verse....i was feelin some of your verses......i have seen u do better verses from u but i liked this one as well.....u had some nice creativity in your verse and your verse was consistant...this was a nice verse.....8/10

vote/emerge.......no hate just a vote

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where is my DR when i need them

lol

Originality - Emerge.. v.witty an creative
Punches - Emerge.. cos of the above.. plus they knitted together.. not all stand-alone punches
Personals - Both.. each had shit on the other
Flow - Both.. easy to follow
Opener - Emerge.. raised a smile.. much more witty
Closer - Emerge.. had to laugh at that one!

VoTe = Emerge

Both came personal but i didnt feel Diverse's punches were as effective as Emerge's.. both had the content but Emerge put it into words better.

Drop a vote on this plz:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111341

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Upppppp
Just droppin this of at the top.
Bye.

This kid's a herb, just by reading all of his verses you see..
a bunch of filler with capitalization, i think you deserve everyone an apology
nope
Thats right, you wasted our time, everyone expected something tough,
and i'd give you some helpful tips but im afraid 10 lines just wont be enough!
lol, nice
Emerge formed a crew thats all about compassion and gay pride,
and 'merge decided to join two crews, because of all the dicks he could ride!
nope
His talents a piece of trash, like a condom gone wrong..
and the only thing 'merge killed was the paper he wrote his verse on!
this got a slight smile...nice
If every man hes been with turned straight i'd bet he'd yell out "please take my life"..
and i dont keep my punches family related because he covers that in his sex life!
I know what it meant...I wasn't really feeing it

About 2 nice punches out of 5. Wasnt feeling some of the punches. It ws ok, but could have been better, with harder punches.

I often wonder where my wackness went that was built up inside
I deride.....
but with a sense of happiness...i found it deeply instilled in derive!
eehhh, could have been better
You homo. . .sex punches are a no-no damn...I thought you knew
Fuck beating you black & blue...
....ama punch you in & out every single hue!
lol, nice one
And this foo is isn't only a biter. ..he also chews and swallows too
Laughed when he said,...
....... "Even if i was Jill I wouldn't be jack shit next to you"
slight smile...it was ok
You personify ceramic....shit even with this filler i got you glazed
WOW. . .your home page was dope...till you named it purple haze
blah
You had no chance after all you still quote, edit, and explain bars
blah blah blah blah blah blah.....
^^^^considered quoteable when put next to your shit by far
ok

This verse had a few decent lines. Could have hit harder on a couple concepts, but it was ok.

Overall Emerge had a better read top to bottom, than derive. This was close, but Emerge clearly had more decent lines. Neither came with personals that were real ill, so on pure readability, and punches, Emerge gets my vote.

Vote: Emerge

Please drop an honest vote here:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111341

Edit:
Sorry but the polls says I need 500 posts to vote...
I'm about 200 posts shy..
Anyway, good luck on getting voting in this...
-W1

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This kid's a herb, just by reading all of his verses you see..
a bunch of filler with capitalization, i think you deserve everyone an apology
^^...wack...1/10

Thats right, you wasted our time, everyone expected something tough,
and i'd give you some helpful tips but im afraid 10 lines just wont be enough!
meh...4/10

Emerge formed a crew thats all about compassion and gay pride,
and 'merge decided to join two crews, because of all the dicks he could ride!
^that is very true..he does ride dicks...6/10

His talents a piece of trash, like a condom gone wrong..
and the only thing 'merge killed was the paper he wrote his verse on!
^compliment??..need to be more direct..2/10

If every man hes been with turned straight i'd bet he'd yell out "please take my life"..
and i dont keep my punches family related because he covers that in his sex life! (meaning hes into incest)
meh..sex jokes=gay..sex jokes for closer=1/10


overall for derive...14/50....28%



I often wonder where my wackness went that was built up inside
I deride.....
but with a sense of happiness...i found it deeply instilled in derive!
meh..worded wack 4/10

You homo. . .sex punches are a no-no damn...I thought you knew
Fuck beating you black & blue...
....ama punch you in & out every single hue!
You Homo??...why do u play off his verse?...0/10

And this foo is isn't only a biter. ..he also chews and swallows too
Laughed when he said,...
....... "Even if i was Jill I wouldn't be jack shit next to you"
ok...6/10

You personify ceramic....shit even with this filler i got you glazed
WOW. . .your home page was dope...till you named it purple haze
coo...6/10

You had no chance after all you still quote, edit, and explain bars
blah blah blah blah blah blah.....
^^^^considered quoteable when put next to your shit by far
played..3/10


overall for emerge...19/50...38%...he wins..


yup...late

Um... Sorry Haze, Emerge did take this one.

Though I liked the line about killing the paper, the rest was blah.

Emerge. None of your lines stood out enough to quote em, but you were more consistent and just had better punches.

Haze. Work on some better personals and disses. Not very hard with them mayne.

V/Emerge.

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