Thanks for the advice and vote Com.

.................................................

Out for now...

...these Very Strong words from such a Young White Boy..
their Goes your End..career folds to that Quotes Extent
u Had a Chance to Swing back...
.................................till u Chose to Garment a Dress
check P's Battles..he's truly Taken on that Feeding Touch..
nah...most of this dont rhyme...It's not very hard hitting at all
You're right....
......U don't Really suck but You Sure Do Eat a Bunch..
I searched and searched to see if Kid was Worthy to Throw Down
Discovered his Signature Move...
.....................................When no Skill was Found....
aight, the end of this was ok
So all in all...I guess He gon' Drop some Shit to Try to Match..
I'll be waitin on his Verse...
.............................Till he gets his Hand Out that Rhino's Ass..
Now Thats diggin deep..So take ya Precious Time with No Rush..
so "Drop when your ready" and Uhh......"Good Luck"...-Young P
wasn't feeling the rhino line....not really feeling the closer either

I just wasn't feeling much of this verse. Weird rhyme scheme, weird structure, and not very hard hitting punches.

Game doesn't even return favors anymore, like he got an easy dickride pass.
So when I said I'll squash ya hopes, I shoulda expected a poke in the ass!
nope
I'm scared. This is one time I might not even be able to match Game's shit.
Cause I asked him about his structure...

nasisthebestever: ?

.................................................. .....And even he couldn't explain it!!
slight smile...this was aight
You lame with those rymes, no position, so ...dick... you tend to straddle.
Told him to search for real skill... And he went back to my first battle!!
ok, this was cool
And to think that I almost mistook you for a member of Deja Vu...
Not because of your talent...

nasisthebestever: my first verse ever was gayness!

....................And damn, you didn't think that your last one was too?!
this was eeh, the streched lines and structure softened the punch...Could have been alot better
This is your fault, right?, cause you planned to battle me, it's a due stop.
Its not just RB, even your avatar wasnt lookin forward to what u dropped!
nah, this is just a flip on the line that .:K:. used on Wise Ways
I don't search for my disses, so I was suprised to find this with my luck...
Now I'm letting everyone in on the big secret, it's true...
.................................................. ...................GAMETIME SUCKS!!
wack

this had a couple decent punches...a couple nice concepts that should have been used better though.Also hade that weird structure.

I've gotta go with P on this one, for better punches and concepts

Vote: P

Please drop an honest vote here:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111341

-W1

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Cool. Some weird feedback, but nevertheless, thank you for the vote.

Upping again. Do people not see this or something?

And damn. Panthers lost superbowl. Aint that some shit.

i dont bitch young ...but Com's vote is a piece of shit...i mean..
why would he vote if he in a hurry?...ima have to IR this

^I officially consider u an arrogant piece of shit....One

vote #3

Ok.......
Waiting on votes guys..........
Please?

V/Gametime

Young -- I liked your creativity w/ the punches, seen a few familiar concepts
but you flipped them quite well. your punches were creative but nuttin worthy
of wow!! overall your flow hurt you here coz i had to pick it up a lotta the time

Gametime--Structure works for some but not for you..the quotes took me
off balance sometimes n once again i had to pick up the verse again
but your punches were well thought of and some had potential to hit
really hard. jus concentrate on that more than structure pz

P.S----COM does vote for P in nearly all battles he's having l8ly
I'll be watchin it out for anymore pz

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LOL^.
*Searches COM's last ten pages.

3 of my battles.

Woot woot.

Game... you got skillz, punches were good but the ugly structure fucked it all up for me. That shit was a task to read... not enjoyable when I have to study the damn thing... still a good drop, just not quite enough... really close though

P, you came dope as usual... I swear I'm gonna find out who ghosts for you LMAO but you took this hands down with consistant, albeit somewhat played, punches.

vote - p

yall hit up my shit with Lyric in this forum. pz


-edited to correct a misspell

Lol. Damn man, I told you already. It's a combination of the lines Feeble, Walter, and Av don't use.

One more vote?

*I'll get at your battle Lyric/Spit

You Set yaself up from the Very Beginning to get Destroyed
Hence..
Quote:
Originally Posted by Young P

Fuck dat...i didnt bite nuttin
nigga!.......................................


...these Very Strong words from such a Young White Boy..
ok, not too powerful tho
their Goes your End..career folds to that Quotes Extent
u Had a Chance to Swing back...
.................................till u Chose to Garment a Dress
ok
check P's Battles..he's truly Taken on that Feeding Touch..
Quote:
Originally Posted by Young P

So I Am Voting For Chrit, And No I Am Not "DOWN WIT HIM SUCKIN HIS DICK"...

I Eat His Asscrack Out...

You're right....
......U don't Really suck but You Sure Do Eat a Bunch..
lol nice
I searched and searched to see if Kid was Worthy to Throw Down
Discovered his Signature Move...
.....................................When no Skill was Found....
ehh ok
So all in all...I guess He gon' Drop some Shit to Try to Match..
I'll be waitin on his Verse...
.............................Till he gets his Hand Out that Rhino's Ass..
lol ok personal
Now Thats diggin deep..So take ya Precious Time with No Rush..
so "Drop when your ready" and Uhh......"Good Luck"...-Young P
kinda a weak closer



Game doesn't even return favors anymore, like he got an easy dickride pass.
So when I said I'll squash ya hopes, I shoulda expected a poke in the ass!
lol
I'm scared. This is one time I might not even be able to match Game's shit.
Cause I asked him about his structure...

nasisthebestever: ?

.................................................. .....And even he couldn't explain it!!
nice
You lame with those rymes, no position, so ...dick... you tend to straddle.
Told him to search for real skill... And he went back to my first battle!!
ehh ok
And to think that I almost mistook you for a member of Deja Vu...
Not because of your talent...

nasisthebestever: my first verse ever was gayness!

....................And damn, you didn't think that your last one was too?!
lol nice
This is your fault, right?, cause you planned to battle me, it's a due stop.
Its not just RB, even your avatar wasnt lookin forward to what u dropped!
ok
I don't search for my disses, so I was suprised to find this with my luck...
Now I'm letting everyone in on the big secret, it's true...
.................................................. ...................GAMETIME SUCKS!!
played, but still gave me a laugh

I have to go with young P ion this one. He jus came with mad personals that had me rollin. Game came wit too many played lines and didn't hit hard on some of his punches.

Please drop an honest vote here guys. Thanks http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112157

this was a nice battle

game-u came with a nice verse u had some good punches and personals...and u used those quotes very well...also u had some nice creativity....good verse....8/10

young-u also came wit a nice ass verse....your punches connected well and u had some nice personals...this was a good verse....i really felt your punches connected well......tight verse...9/10

vote/young......this was very close....both of u had some nice personals and punches...game u came wit a nice verse but i feel P just out punched u by a hair....that is why my vote goes to him......but this was a nice ass battle props to both