Thanks for recognizing that I have potential, But throw some votes my way.

i voted earlier but i left a link to a closed battle so heres my link plz drop an honest vote on it

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111122

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Uppin for votes................................Holla at cha boy

official, you came strong for a newb, but your structure threw me off in da deep end and was whack too!!!!!!! looking at your verse...your punchlines were somewhat good but not any Canibus or shit though. Menolin kept up da tight flow and structure even some of your punches weren't hitting dawg.... pretty creative and unique and had a better personals . Menolin get my vote for having harder punches and personals dat even dis newb Art Official couldn't stop if he tried. I enjoyed dis battle from both sides job well done keep on elevating and work on structure and punches Official.

vote=Menolin

vote for my battle below thanks man..................

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110451
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109978

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last ime uppin....................................

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punches men: these little dogs come in, and think they can piss on the big trees,
this guy so weak......
..........he the type that after keyin up text, starts to show fatigue,

metas men: i police the front lines, i take away your stress, give you a-rest**

personals men: im like a kids braking a vase....
.........i leave 'art' poorly fixed, like a young child by using plasters (nice meta)

peep mine please
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110386

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Axiom

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Because im such a generous guy..
I like to give away..a Uppin

Both weren't to bad just a couple things need fixed. But all in all I give it to Menolin.

upppppppppppppnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn for these 2............55

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ite official...your structure was wak man,
which made your verse a bore to read...try structure it
better read sum elavated battles and see how they are done,
also your punches seemed forced to me man..they were ok but,
it was just real forced cus of your wordplay they were werded wrng man,
007-nice verse man...better from you you had a few tite punches in there,
also had a nice structure man..youre elavateing niuce shit..work on personals.


plz hit this up na http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109550 thx alot..........pz