No need to break shit down here. rapid had the better punches, and flow, used more personals. venom dropped a weak verse seems like it was done quickly, and didn't really have any good disses, cept maybe one. Overall both had good structure and schemes, but rapid was more creative and his punches hit harder.

vote-rapid

first off.........rapid fire took this shit easily.........Venom had to simple of rhymes and some stupid ass punch lines about how your incedible, and your lyrical skill......of course it's your lyrical skill............what are you talking about...........

punches go to rapidfire........structure to rapid, shit, everything to rapid on this one................my vote doesnt count cause i dont have 100 posts.....
but i vote rapid.........

yo I need one more vote to win this...the damn mods wanted to be mean and take away a vote for me cuz some idiot didn't vote right...n I need this shit to be closed so I can open a crew battle...

peace

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^ Erm... rules are rules.. and I'm no idiot.

You get 2 more ups due to reasons I don't care to mention.

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coo then...lol.....waiting on the last vote....

peace

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fuck it....last up......somebody fucking kill this battle...

peace

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iight heres the breakdown.. rapid had a much more complex rhyme scheme, and punches to back it up, even with short bars.. some witty lines and nice disses.. the ass/face line made me laugh.. venom came in.. not flowin too well at first, by the time he picked it up it was too late and he didnt throw any eyepoppin punches.. disses were mediocre, so i think rapid won this with a stronger verse, more directed at hitting his opponent.. hit this up with an honest vote, no hate or beef

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...649#post1185649

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