lol, good battle. But Meters takes this for sure. He had sum real hard hittin punches in this one that allowed him to pull off teh victory and they were creative too. Virtuoso was good too...but as good as meters, no way. Flow goes to Virtuoso...but meters takes structure. Great battle guys.

v/ - Meters...He had the punches.


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tobacco pipe smoker
escobar, your life is over
justify the righteous nova
bullets flew out his right shoulder

Why not up again, i'd like this to be voted on.........................
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tobacco pipe smoker
escobar, your life is over
justify the righteous nova
bullets flew out his right shoulder

virtuso
Your greatest punches were ..erased.. while the rest-were-irrelevant
You'll never elevate like your "skills caught up with the law", just "arrested development"
nice, strong opener

This pest-aint-intelligent but I'll still maim and dangle-this-nerd
A tangle-with-Verb? I should be "stepping in flower beds" the way I "trample-this-herb"
second line kinda played, but not too bad

This tramp-is-absurd, I "get under your skin" to the point I could "dance-with-your-nerves"
Im invading the "corners of your mind", you feel my "hands-on-the-curb"?
nice wordplay, aiight punch

In case you don’t figure-in-time I’ll let you know the kid-is-divine
Serve you like “Baby Backs” at “Chili’s” when I dangle your “rib”-in-your-“spine”
not too bad, second line was nice

You so “gassed” that if you smelled smoke, then most likely your ass might-be-”burning”
Meters “wrapping hair” (rapping here) puts more people to “sleep” than an Afghans’ “nightly-Turban”
oh oh, nice, flow was a lil off to me

Only way you’d ever have “nerves of steel” is with the “shank-through-ya-skin”
I’m taking all categories for voters but at least in boredom-you’ll-win.....
not good for a closer


the multies you used made you punches hit pretty hard, coupled with your wordplay, a very nice verse!!

only thing is some of the lines were a little stretched which made the flow a lil off!!


meters
Stepping to me launches you in the air…an crushes ya flat
Took your advice and looked up……….
…………..……..so I could see what ya sig’s laughing at!
i could see what you was aiming for, could of been worded better

Wanted in on this battle...couldn’t have been more wrong
Because you’re out of the woods when I beat you…….
…………...back to the cunt reside in which you belong!
not too bad, another nice concept

I stepped into this battle vicious..ready to win at all costs
What a surprise it was for me……….
……………………………when at any rate, you lost!
made me laugh, nice flow, an pretty witty

Trying to hang with me…you’re one of the week I ditch
Woke up to check the calendar……
…………………….................and then I sunday bitch!
noice concept, wordplay let you down

Two of my verses should be posted..make it even lyrically
Because you’d have to bite my entire verse…..
………………………………….to get a taste of victory!
shouldn't of said verse twice, was a pretty good punch though

I merked you in this battle…but who really won is blurred
Because I have to hear this bitch squeal…
…………….……..….after I made him a broken record!
again bad wordplay

Running with IJL……and you can’t even step to them
Ya only in that wack crew……
……………….’cuz you couldn’t beat so joined ‘em!
nah, this didn't come off

you shouldn't of used the structure all the way through, there was only a few bars which needed it!!

you concepts were nice, but wordplay let you down, consistancy helps out in battles,
if your wordplay was batter you would of won this battle.
no hate.

my vote - virtuso
harder punches, nicer multies, an consistancy that made his verse strong all the way through!!

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^blah, whatever. upping (4 i think) for last few votes, drop your link.

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tobacco pipe smoker
escobar, your life is over
justify the righteous nova
bullets flew out his right shoulder

Your greatest punches were ..erased.. while the rest-were-irrelevant
You'll never elevate like your "skills caught up with the law", just "arrested development"
This pest-aint-intelligent but I'll still maim and dangle-this-nerd
A tangle-with-Verb? I should be "stepping in flower beds" the way I "trample-this-herb"
This tramp-is-absurd, I "get under your skin" to the point I could "dance-with-your-nerves"
Im invading the "corners of your mind", you feel my "hands-on-the-curb"?
In case you don’t figure-in-time I’ll let you know the kid-is-divine
Serve you like “Baby Backs” at “Chili’s” when I dangle your “rib”-in-your-“spine”
You so “gassed” that if you smelled smoke, then most likely your ass might-be-”burning”
Meters “wrapping hair” (rapping here) puts more people to “sleep” than an Afghans’ “nightly-Turban”
Only way you’d ever have “nerves of steel” is with the “shank-through-ya-skin”
I’m taking all categories for voters but at least in boredom-you’ll-win.....
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Weak closer, very nice opener, good consistent wordplay, but the multis were sketchy, sorta messed up midway with your multis. Punches were alright, but excelled with wordplay. Used a bit of filler.


Stepping to me launches you in the air…an crushes ya flat
Took your advice and looked up……….
…………..……..so I could see what ya sig’s laughing at!
Wanted in on this battle...couldn’t have been more wrong
Because you’re out of the woods when I beat you…….
…………...back to the cunt reside in which you belong!
I stepped into this battle vicious..ready to win at all costs
What a surprise it was for me……….
……………………………when at any rate, you lost!
Trying to hang with me…you’re one of the week I ditch
Woke up to check the calendar……
…………………….................and then I sunday bitch!
Two of my verses should be posted..make it even lyrically
Because you’d have to bite my entire verse…..
………………………………….to get a taste of victory!
I merked you in this battle…but who really won is blurred
Because I have to hear this bitch squeal…
…………….……..….after I made him a broken record!
Running with IJL……and you can’t even step to them
Ya only in that wack crew……
……………….’cuz you couldn’t beat so joined ‘em!
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Good punches, ill personals. The 'looking up' line was real nice. Set up lines with the flow wastes a lot of space though. Punches were more effective than Virt's, but no multis. Flip some multis next time. Good opener, good closer. Slightly better than Virt's
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Vote - Meters

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tobacco pipe smoker
escobar, your life is over
justify the righteous nova
bullets flew out his right shoulder

i aint tryin to cause hate meters!!
but in my opinion thats how the battle went!!

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V had some nice punchlines and killer wordplay dat Arrested Develpoment line was good for him.......and he stayed focused on dissing Meters and not getting served backed da same dish he dished out which was actually kinda hot.V had some good metaphors but what really hit were his wordplay then punches.......Meters got beat by a couple of meters as far as i'm concerned. Meters jus relyed on punches and metaphors but was decent as well.... but da better dissing verse is V i'll have to go with dis guy on dis one no hate or dick riding, peace.

vote=Virtuoso

place an honest vote on dis battle to close it ...thanks

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Damn… some ‘common sense’ must not be so common-to-u…
Scared of your shadow?…trust me that’s always been Following-u....TEST me.....you'll soon be ~Sonned~

well i cant vote on this battle just givin feedback...(in meters crew)
..uppin thread as well...
anyways....ironically, (sarcasm) i do think meters took it. V, your style is so oldschool with all the quotes and dashes and somewaht worthless metaphors. u only picked them cause they rhyme. focus on the concept of your punch.
meters just punched the whole time. had some ill ones, had some okay/kinda weak ones as well. but in my worthless opinion u took it from the punches. good battle though.

virtuoso hit up my battle vs. bombz

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111995