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Menolin 5 71.43%
Se7eN 2 28.57%
Voters: 7. You may not vote on this poll

 
 
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Old 02-01-04, 08:20 PM   #16
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Breakdown

Se7en's Verse,
I’ll twist ya shit in the middle, so his skills look a little to little
It’s good to see, how in his sig he brags he beat a newb named Art Official
WAck Opener

1000 plus posts, still seems his skill and talent is a complete joke
This guys so dumb, he sniffs a whole letter of anthranx and bleeds coke
Nice Wordplay

Hard to figure out, he claims he’s elevated and his rep is bigger now
He could be a gun slinger and still not know how the pulling of trigger sounds
Ok LInes

I’ll be a giver, hit ya so hard that your bitch ass craps your liver
This guy couldn’t be criminal, if his ass was related to jack-the-ripper
Played

So new, so unused, make your style look a little mangled and loose
You done “digged your own grave”, while my rhymes strangle ya like a noose
Decent CLoser


Menolin's Verse,
you couldn't key up tight raps, if your keyboard came in spandex,
your ryhmes come.... then colapse... like eager men giving bad sex,
Nice Opener

you dis-respecting 'pac', placing upon him your wack status,
your sigs say untold truth,
....................should be "is thier any RB crew that aint raped us"
Stretched and Wack

i would catch you............ but i don't really like to backtrack*,
im rippin the shit out of this kids, like little kids with party packs,
Blah

yo can tell no one likes you... when opportunity knocks you out,
i hit you with mathmatics.... flip, twist and fuck you about,
Wack

my lines decieve your vision....... shit, call me your eye-con(icon)
if you spat of the 'right' of your mouth, your lines still be wrong,
Nice Closer

My vote goes to Menolin. Se7en, your verse was very simple. You didn't have any punchlines or creativity, but your flow and wordplay was nice. Menolin's verse was a lil better, he came wit harder punches which i see as the bread winner.


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Old 02-01-04, 08:26 PM   #17
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uppin x4 please vote please vote,....................................VOTE VOTE VOTE
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Old 02-01-04, 08:35 PM   #18
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uppin x5 please vote please vote,....................................VOTE VOTE VOTE
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Old 02-01-04, 08:36 PM   #19
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nice battle se7en, still could go either way,
you elevated a lot recently!!!
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Old 02-01-04, 09:00 PM   #20
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Quote:
Punches: Se7en, I thought Menolin's punches were pretty played. Punches were close, but I thought se7en was more creative.
Wordplay: Men, the Icon wordplay was the only one in both verses, so Men takes this category.
Multis: Se7en, some lines had multis, but be more consistent next time
Personals: Tie, both had a good amount of personals.
Opener: se7en takes this with a good personal
Closer: Men takes this with a nice wordplay

Vote - Se7en

7 edged Men out by being more creative with his punches, very close battle though.

He could be a gun slinger and still not know how the pulling of trigger sounds
7's best line

if you spat of the 'right' of your mouth, your lines still be wrong
Men's best line

Please return the favor in my signature


Shut up..moron.

Obviously this was somewhat close..
But no doubt Menolin takes this.
Creativity in punches, aswell as personal facts..which makes for the best punches.
Where well presented in Menolin's verse.
Where as in Seven's they werent there. at all.
Seven had some good lines.. not bad...especially for a Dynasty Soldier.
But Menolin was just better point blank.
Some potential quotables...not really a enjoyable battle to read though..
Slightly boring & a bunch of old concepts..
But vote goes to Menolin
 
Old 02-05-04, 03:02 PM   #21
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Se7en had a real good rhymescheme, and a few decent punches..but most of his stuff was just kinda hard disses....the line about "he's so dumb he sniffs a letter of anthrax and bleeds coke.." I wasn't really feelin that too much...seemed like u just needed somethin to rhyme....flow was kinda off too due to ur long bars...

Menolin had a better flow..vocab was about even..rhymes were also kinda even..punchlines definately go to Menolin tho...he came hard from the begining to the end..I liked the 2nd line..about eager sex or w/e..lol pretty creative...

vote- Menolin...

can someone hit up my battle against village pimp? it's in my sig...
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