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Old 02-05-04, 08:25 AM   #1
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I can't vote because I dont have enough posts but heres my thoughts.

Flow - Both had decnet flow but Brethren to me flowed a little better.
Punches-I have to go with Brethren on this one. His punches were more
more creative and hit harder. Jame's Jr. had a few puches but they
were kind of weak and lacked that certain originality.
Personals- Brethren cleaned up with the personals. He did a good job of
ripping on Jame's Bio and quote. Jame's didn't really have any
personals, he tried with the Michigan line, but it came off too weak.
Next time he should try using more personals. Try checking out
your opponents info to find something to use against them.
Vocab- Jame's vocab was a little to simple for my taste. He needs to elevate
Brethren on the other, I thought, did a nice job on the vocab.
Overall- To me this battle was one sided. James Jr was not bad, but needs to
be more creative with his vocab and punches. It also couldn't hurt
to use more personals. My vote goes to Brethren because simply
he had better and stronger punches/Personals.

Please vote on my battles or give feedback if you dont have enough posts
thanks. apathy vs. jamie and apathy vs. Gravity
 
Old 02-02-04, 02:28 PM   #2
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yo do me a favor and vote on Daffer22 vs Baz187
 
Old 02-02-04, 03:02 PM   #3
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^^^ no, you wak ass motherfucker .
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Old 02-02-04, 03:11 PM   #4
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one-sided battle...an eazy win for brethen....he didnt have 2 try very hard...
james..ur flow waz ok...not thatttttt bad.....but work on that...and make ur punches stronger....add more excitment and vocabulary.....ok for a newb...keep elevating....
brethen- good shyt wit da flow....nice punches....n ok structure....nice vocab.....overall- ur verse waz good....not dat boring....
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punches: brethen- his came harder and were on the point.....(experience)
flow: .....brethen barely.....both gotta work on that....u gotta catch a rhythm....n stay on da topic
strucutre: brethen....he kept hiz verse neat....not all over the place...james- werk on that.......even out the linez....
vote: brethen....no hate ......no d/r.......1
keep elevating-james...
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Old 02-02-04, 04:21 PM   #5
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james jr takes dis,good battle but james puches hit harder just,flow and structure was taken by jamejr too.keep it up both of us.
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Old 02-02-04, 11:12 PM   #6
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got to close this battle......
uping # 1

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Old 02-02-04, 11:29 PM   #7
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ima have to give this one to brethren he was spittin hard on punches anf flo all that shit.

other dude did aight he just need to elevate a lil bit

vote=brethren

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Old 02-03-04, 01:51 AM   #8
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flow-tie
punches-breth
style-tie
wordplay-james
personals-breth
creativity-breth
overall-breth

Brethren had the harder punches, he did his homework too. james flow was lil choppy, the punches needed to be better, also work on the creativity as well. vote-breth

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JamesJr. PM's me, "can you beat me please", I accept with open arms,
Leave this battle like cigarettes, close but no cigar,
..lil choppy, but good punch.

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Old 02-03-04, 07:27 AM   #9
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Thanks, i'll hit those up later .
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Old 02-03-04, 02:51 PM   #10
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Uppin #4, last vote, c'mon, drop a link, I will return the favor
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Old 02-03-04, 05:34 PM   #11
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upping for the #3 time

just want to end this........
so I can battle more peeps
 
Old 02-03-04, 11:01 PM   #12
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James: i was feelin the first 3 lines, if you would've kept it up i'd be sreaming murder.

Bretheren: line one was clean, too nice... the second two what are you thinking? i realize act rhymes with dendropheliac, but c'mon.

James: lines 6-10 i'm lovin em they flow well and they hit hard too

Bretheren:"Rearrange your name, and get a 'mesaj' about this kid bruising himself,
Like this kid was battling himself in the mirror, you're losing yaself,
You asking to die battling me, just stick an axe in your thigh,
You ain't an ass-pirate, then why you got a patch in ya eye?," Yeah they ryhme... and


James:"This bitch is thin.... and brittle" NO, no, no, expunge this line from your mind, you didn't need a filler that bad.

Bretheren:"Ohio?! Alien abducted ass live on a farm, why don't you just offer them crops?," LMAO that's great.

James: closer was ok nothing spectacular, but it worked well

Bretheren: That's how you end it?

It's almost a toss up, if Bretheren had a closer that did something... anything, he'd have it, but i give this to JamesJr. Good job, work on the word play.
 
Old 02-03-04, 11:07 PM   #13
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What?! ^^^^ .
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Old 02-04-04, 03:11 AM   #14
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GOOD SHIT JAMES JR IS DA MAN!!!!!!!!!!!

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Old 02-04-04, 04:45 PM   #15
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up n As I said gotta end this battle

there might be a Round 2

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